This story is a sequel to Everymare Loves Chrysalis
One week ago, a spell from Twilight Sparkle to land dates on Hearts and Hooves Day ended in a disaster. It also ended in the "filly code" being accidentally broken, a grave sin that is even worse than bringing about the end of Equestria.
Now, Twilight finds herself begging for her embarrassing punishment to be ended early. Turns out, it was merely the beginning.
Enough will be explained in the story to understand what's going on (and laugh) without having to read the predecessor story first.
Chapters (2)
Pretty funny. Some of Starlight and Celestia are way OOC, but it’s amusing in its way.
The best joke is that Starlight Glimmer gets to stand in judgement of another pony for any reason.
I think it's safe to say that Spoiled Rich/Milk is the worst MLP character
...This includes whatever this "filly code" is, right?
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Starlight and Celestia are on the OOC side, but I did that on purpose to do some experimenting, and see how things go.
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Either her or Sludge
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"Filly code" is synonymous for "girl code" for ponies.
Filly = young female pony/horse, so filly code = girl code, and colt code = boy code.
That was something I just didn't think I'd need to break down and explain. You're the first one I've ever seen ask what "filly code" mean.
This is pretty funny. I think this is the most you've ever made me laugh.
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Glad to hear that!
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Thanks!
hahhahaha that ending
nice work planning a sequence?
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I had big laugh when I thought of that too.
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If you meant sequel, nope, I'm not planning to write a sequel to this one.
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oh ok i would have like to see what you would of come up with what happen with triklight
Brilliant, just brilliant.
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Thanks, and glad you liked it!
Just... too much
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The ending or the whole chapter?
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The whole thing
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Okay. As I said in another comment, I was doing some experimenting with this story and was aware that i was pushing things, but wanted to try it out and see how it goes.
Okay so, Twilight Sparkle redeeming Tirek through romance. Is that a thing? I feel like that should be a thing.
Let’s not kid ourselves. It was already a thing in some dark corner of the internet.
The one she cast to alert Celestia doesn’t count?
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I can't believe I missed that. It's a by-product of an edit I did when I was editing the story, but forgot to fix that so it wouldn't create a continuity error. Fixing it now!
somehow "filly code" made me think of "the Adult Conspiracy" in Piers Anthony's Xanth novels.
it prohibits talking about...sex.
PS: in Xanth, babies REALLY ARE brought by Storks!
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That so? I didn't know that.
Can you add Sven to that list of first to go?
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Who's Sven?
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Sven Gallop
Guy who tried to use Rara/Countess Coloratura so he could blackmail other's into completing ridiculous demands.
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Oh right, I actually forgot about him. Yep, he should be on that list too.
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