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ThePinkedWonder


Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

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Since she became an alicorn princess, Princess Twilight Sparkle has done her best in her role. However, while she had grown into a remarkable princess and even gained her own student in Starlight Glimmer, Twilight wasn't a true princess.

At least, she wasn't according to Princess Celestia. It was time for Twilight to take her place as one of Equestria's true princesses.

However, Twilight would not like what it would require her to do. She wasn't going to be the only one to not like it.


EDIT: featured through 07/20/21-07/23/21!!
#1 on the featured list on 07/20/21 & #1 with mature mode turned off on 07/21/21 & 07/22/21!!

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We'll send in a specialist, stand by...

Hilarious.

Loved this. Especially loved the changelings part :rainbowlaugh:

Guess it explains why Chrysalis was able to kidnap all 5 Alicorn Princesses at once. And Now Flurry doesn't have to humiliate herself later in life, she can just blow villians away, cause she already got the "must be kidnapped" thing done as a baby.

Hahahahaha!

Ahhh… that was good fun. Very much thanks!

Hillbe #6 · 1 week ago · · ·

:trollestia: I'm sure that picture wasn't a fold out poster!
:moustache: With a flank like yours it'd be a road side billboard
:twilightoops:
:trollestia: At least it's not a mushy marsh mellow like you know whos
:raritystarry:
:moustache: She's not mushy at all
:facehoof:
:raritycry: Cake eater!
:trollestia: Dragon breath
:duck: Miss raise the sun one trick pony
:trollestia: Blue Blood
:duck: You............
:twilightsheepish: Lets talk about something else, Books

10907713

Mario's a specialist all right. Very few have more experience in this kind of thing than him.:rainbowlaugh:




10907735

Thanks!




10907750

Thanks, and the changeling part was my favorite part to write!




10907787

My headcanon is she went after each alicorn one by one when they are alone in canon to make capturing them much more manageable.

But a second underlying reason works too.



10907791

You're welcome!




10907797

:rainbowlaugh:

Something like that happening could make for a fun sequel, or in general.

Tia did a dumb. Glimmy is peeved.

If they ever find out that discord pranked them with the kidnapping thing they are going go nuts.

10907828
Hehehe, this is quite hysterical, I loved it ThePinkedWonder! Especially the changelings bit.

Twilight is going to spread friendship across Equestria but suddenly, in the G5 Equestria, friendship has been lost! What the hay was she doing?! Was she sleeping on the job? Well, we won't know until we watch the movie.

10908050
Meh, Discord doesn't suffer consequences. So sayeth The Ending of the End and A Matter of Principals.

10908164
Maybe they just gave him a hard time off screen.

10908176
He also got a medal onscreen.

10908178
When he saved them from the changelings but that doesn't say they ever found out about his stunt. And knowing discord he not going to tell on purpose and considering how distracted he was about fluttershy and twilight student graduation the odds of him snitching is not high.

Even after discovering the magic of friendship and later becoming an alicorn princess, Twilight’s innate love for reading remained. Thus, when not performing princess duties, solving her friends’ problems, or struggling to crack the mystery of what Fluttershy’s job is, Twilight often spent her time reading books.

Ok I never thought of that till just now. Seriously, what does fluttershy do for a living? She volunteers at the vet clinic but there’s never any mention of a specific job. Everyone else more or less has a job or business

10908164
Don't forget "Twilight's Kingdom".

10907964

Very.



10908050

They wouldn't like it to be sure. Discord would be for it if they were to found out.




10908163

Glad you liked it!

And I think the whole fandom is wondering what happened in G5. We'll find out how things went wrong and if it Twilight could have even anything about it in September.




10908164

Maybe not in the canon show, but I'm not one of the writers or editors from the show and do my own thing. All bets are off if Starlight thinks of a good way to get payback and/or tells the others what she found out, because she was dead serious about it.



10908257

No idea. Until I heard it mentioned somewhere, I never even thought about how Fluttershy gets her bits. Maybe she gets unemployment if it exists in Equestria, or there are other ways to get bits in Equestria if you don't have a proper job.

In truth, the writers might not have even thought about a job for Fluttershy, or if they couldn't think of a good way to put it in episodes due to time restraints and/or didn't think it was important enough.

10908164
That's true. Somehow I betting that if he smart he won't tell how his prank caused so much trouble. Though they might have get mad celestial too for falling for it so long.

10908353
She seems really self sufficient though, and I can’t think of a time where she ever spent money period. She probably lives off the land.

10908392

There was the time she paid bits in a marketplace during the "Putting Your Hoof Down" episode. But other than that, I don't think of a time she paid bits either. But, maybe you're on to something about Fluttershy being so self-sufficient. Maybe she rarely needs to use bits, and the few bits she has she got from her parents, if not from unemployment. It wouldn't make her too much of a "freeloader that lives off her parents" if they weren't giving her much so it was no big deal.

Unlike how Zephyr Breeze freeloaded on them before he finally cut it out.

10908396
Makes sense to me. She might also get donations or something.

10907828
Mario? I didn't send in Mario.

I sent in our Princess Kidnapping Specialist.

10908506

:facehoof:

Oh right, the kidnapping/ponynapping specialist! Bowser usually only kidnaps Princess Peach because he's in love with her, but he could be willing to try to capture some alicorns for a change of pace.

And he's also a specialist for letting princesses get rescued. Perfect!

10908408
A Brony Analyst suggested Fluttershy was quite literally payed to live on the borders of the EverFree Forest, to keep an eye out for monsters. Either clandestine as a S.M.I.L.E agent or the equivalent of a Park Ranger. Since working with monsters in any capacity is dangerious the pay is very good. So she grew up middle class by is now rich, explaining why she has money but lives modestly.
Twilight is really the only Pony who absolutely came "from Money" all the other girls have regular Jobs.

10908518
Wow ThePinkedWonder, your story made it to the feature colum. Congratulations!

“Now, to become a true princess, you must be ponynapped by a villain.”

Chysalis tho...
>keeps reading
Ah. Well played.

And here I thought that this was Bowser getting smart:pinkiecrazy:

10908506

10908518

Lots of people are hoping Estee finishes that story someday.

10908572

Hmm. That theory would make sense, since most of what the characters do are off-screen and we only got to see a tiny part of their lives, albeit the more major parts.




10908359

Discord would probably want to keep it to themself (he won't want to make Fluttershy mad!) but he could eventually get fed up and just ask Celestia how she fell for it.




10908841

Thank. I made sure to have this story happen in season 6 and before Chrysalis made her move.




10908897

:rainbowlaugh:




10908964

The story's still marked as incomplete, but given the last update was 4 years ago, Estee still pumps out stories regularly and been updating their more recent ones, it seems slim-to-none that they'll pick it back up. At least not unless someone wants to "adopt" the story and gets Estee's permission to do it.

10909002
He might enjoy watching to see how long it takes them to figure it out.

10908408
Don't forget, Fluttershy runs the Ponyville Pet Center so she may actually be an employee of the state rather than unemployed.

I would have loved to have seen Tia and Discord have a discussion over the whole "The Book" thing.

10910245

I might write bonus chapter(s) or write a sequel having that, as well as what Starlight might do. At the moment, I'm not sure. Though I'd have zero problems with someone else doing it since users sometimes write sequels to someone else's story.

10910632

I think you should be the one to do it so things will go in the spirit you intend for it to....and STILL featured!

...this is canon, it is decided.

This was brilliant, utterly hilarious. I laugh so damn at the letter Celestia sent along with a smaller changelings reactions to it. Nice work

10910961

For the most part, this story could theoretically fit in canon, so why not think of it as actually being canon?



10911610

Thanks, and glad it gave you such big laughs!

Well, that's certainly one explanation! :rainbowlaugh:


10908257
She manages nature like Rainbow does weather.

10914014

Well, that's certainly one explanation! :rainbowlaugh:

That was one of my first thoughts when I thought of this story.:rainbowlaugh:

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