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ThePinkedWonder


Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

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This story is a sequel to She Did WHAT To You?!


After Princess Twilight Sparkle delivered an unimaginable punishment to Queen Chrysalis, Discord took it upon himself to have an important talk with her. A Draconequus-To-Alicorn Talk. He's watched on long enough.

Will his talk with Twilight, or therapy session, be effective?

And if Twilight thinks having Discord as her unexpected pseudo-therapist is crazy enough, wait until she sees who else has come to "help" her...

Enough will be explained to be able to understand what's going on in this story (and laugh) without needing to first read this story's predecessor story or its predecessor story Nopony Interrupts My FRIENDSHIP SPEECH, Starlight Glimmer!!

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HAHA!

This was just as well written as the others. I loved it. Also was crying from laughter at one point. XD

Well done!

She didn’t promise to never inflict “The Ultima”, I note...

Oh, I can't wait to find out what the Ultima is.

i guess the ultima is either they just get body frozen then soul/mind hand over to discord and pinkie pie for a year. or they mind live thought watching the CMC as alicorn try to get their cutie mark in different thing non stop for week.

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Thanks, and glad you liked it!

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Nope! Discord and Nightmare Moon done goofed, because she can still do her harshest punishment if she feels like it!

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It's definitely going to be in the final part! You just might be surprised what it is...

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That would be awful. But not as bad as "The Ultima"!

That look on Twilight's face...that is the look of pure "I don't care"

Many hearty chuckles were had! I wonder if the Pony of Shadows will be ready for the Ultima?

.....Can NMM Stay?

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If I were him, I'd either beg Starswirl to banish me back to limbo before Twilight thinks about "The Ultima", or kiss up to her so she won't do it.

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I'll have to ask Discord. This story was his idea!

But seriously, I wasn't planning on keeping NMM around. But the NMM in this story is really just a clone, but with the memories and feelings of the real deal

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I was hoping it was the Original.....

For ponynapping her niece, Flurry Heart, Twilight punished Chrysalis with something she dubbed “The Works”, where her consciousness was trapped in a lightless void. There, Chrysalis was forced to hear the voice of Pinkie Pie yelling Twilight’s friendship speeches, non-stop, and in twice her normal yell. Which is already loud.

Seriously, I want to read that part with a grown up Flurry Heart. Even if it was just temporary.

“Yeah, yeah, she’s the closest you have to a daughter.”

And this is something I think should be explored more. I can see it being a real thing for Twilight.

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Seriously, I want to read that part with a grown up Flurry Heart. Even if it was just temporary.

When I decided to write this story, that's something I wondered about trying to write in, but couldn't think of a good way to fit it in the story that felt right, or could survive the cuts during editing.

And this is something I think should be explored more. I can see it being a real thing for Twilight.

Right now, I really don't see a way to fit that in the part 4, which will be the final part. There won't be anything beyond "The Ultima"!

BUT, after part 4 was submitted, I am wondering about writing a "what-if" anthology story about any villains that didn't get "The Ultima" or one of Twilight's other punishments. A chapter just about Twilight and Flurry is something I could potentially write in one of its chapters. There's also the option of simply writing it was a side-story, but that's something I would only give heavy thoughts to if there's enough interest. But even if it did, it wouldn't be anytime soon.

Those fools. They should've made her Pinkie Promise it instead! That's the only sure-fire way to guarantee it!

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Yep! Wish I could have found a more accurate picture for this story, but it was closest to it that I could find. The look on Discord's face I think is pretty accurate :rainbowlaugh:

I have a punishment idea.
It's called The Fix.
What is it? That's what you get to decide.

“I hope I never have to go that far.”

Rough translation

“I am totally going to go that far.”

The Alicorn wore a deep dark-blue coat. Her Cutie Mark, one of a crescent moon, was light-blue, seemingly glowing compared to the figure’s dark coat. The pony's coat was in too dark a color to be Princess Luna.

Nightmare Moon's coat color is actually black.

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Good catch. I don't know why I was think "deep-dark blue" color. I might have been talking about a scene when it's not as black as it is other times.

After Starlight cast a temporary age spell on Flurry Heart, so she could beg Twilight to do it, Twilight reversed the spell and freed Chrysalis from the nightmarish void; this was three days ago.

I was about to complain that this was unbelievable, but then I remembered that Starlight did the reverse of this in "Uncommon Bond".

“Wait, why do I have to be the one to leave? This is my castle!”

:rainbowlaugh:

That last line made me chuckle.

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