• Published 24th Jul 2017
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Journey through Alola - darkmage1997

Will, Fluttershy, Toby, Serenity, and Silver Spoon travel through the Alola region

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Announcing rewrite

Hey guys, darkmage1997 here, coming to you with an announcement. I've hit a bit of a roadblock with the next chapter of this story. Which is why I am here to tell you guys that for the time being, until I come up with something to advance the story, the only "new chapters" that will come out will be rewrites of the majority of the previous chapters. These rewrites will be known as "Ultra Rewrites", as to keep things even with the Ultra Sun and Ultra Moon games.

They will have new characters, including a particular group of siblings from another dimension who are very "Loud", if you get what I'm saying. So anyhow, I will be attempting to rewrite the chapters here in a few days when I get the chance.

In addition, the five trainers will catch Pokémon they hadn't previously caught in the existing chapters. Any new Pokémon they catch will be put in bold letters, in order to signify that they are new Pokémon. So until then, this has been a darkmage1997 news report!

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Comments ( 13 )

Cool and whew! I thought it was a complete rewrite of the entire story series! Whew ;3

rewrite the whole sotyr and get rid of the busojyam character he is not a good trainer and him winning battles later on are to forced.

If you are keeping busojyam make him more like cross.
In your original story busojyam was a crappy trainer who beat people by getting strong wild pokemon and never training them

I'll see what I can do

Flora is actually Fluttershy's human name. But yeah, her Rockruff is one that evolves into Dusk Form Lycanroc

What did you think of how the Pokémon acted when Lynn asked them to battle alongside her?

Oh, ho ho ho, snap!

Comment posted by Rhino23 deleted July 24th

When? Her team is in the Author's Note, and her Pokémon in storage too. Nowhere on there is a Lycanroc

Comment posted by Rhino23 deleted July 24th

I saw my mistake the names confused me
It’s fluttershy who has a lycanroc
The name change is confusing

I deleted my comments cuz
Fluttershy new name is Flora
I keep forgetting about the kids sorry didn’t read the old stories

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