A Thief with a heart of a substance better left unsaid wakes up in Equestria after a unlucky turn of events. How will a jaded, world weary human get along with cheery, naive Ponies?
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True though I will admit didn't see that one coming.
Once more, I find myself entertained by the interactions between Max and Noir: their back and forth teasing, interrupted by one or the other being a genuinely good person, is warming to watch. I'm glad that Max is a fan of Pulp Fiction, and hope he liked The Usual Suspects, too.
His reaction to Chryssie went about as I expected, while being entertaining enough to read through, regardless, to observe it's execution. While suspected the mentioned past dealings of Queen and princess, it was nice to see it confirmed. Not sure how I feel about reactions to feedings, on the changeling side of things, but I expect to grow into it. I look forward to hearing the results of Changeling-Pony relations that stem from the negotiations taking place.
The nature of Alicorn estrus was intriguing, especially the juxtaposition between Luna's kinks and her personality. Such only makes me wonder how Celestia's is going to be, if we haven't already witnessed it.
On a final few notes, the interactions between groom and Max, and Cadence's preknowledge of the returning empire, do give a bit to think about, and something to theorize over that information is released.
As ever, I look forward to seeing more from you.
Max takes shit from no one. Expectations on max's reaction met.
This story is so great im re-re-reading it. Im on chapter 4, 19 and of course 32... Yes im reading this story while rereading it and also rereading that because shit is great.
I have to agree with the guy 2 comments below me about how the hell Cadance knows about the Crystal Empire when it has not been seen for 1000 years. Really does give quite a bit to think about. What else does she know and how much she really knows about the world. Thats going to bug me to no ends...
The exchange between Chrissy and Max went on about exactly as I figured it would. With Maxs' god like perception he would be really quick to notice anything out of the ordinary.
As always, great chapter and im looking forward to the next one.
8159555 Thanks for the feedback. To explain the Cadance thing, it just made sense for her to know where she was going to rule. Celestia might be old and forgetful at times, but by no means would she let another alicorn simply idle while they could be doing some good.
I love that this guy didn't do what most fanfics do and just leave chrysalis be even though there's obviously something suspicious happening.
the whole conversation leading up to this statement was absofuckinglutly beautiful i love it lol
Not Boku No Pico. Anything but that