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Retired military, retired gunsmith, tired cynic.


And... D'oh! Foot meet mouth. · 2:22am Sep 9th, 2017

Just got the word that I'd failed moderation again. *sigh* This time for having a short description that was TOO short.

I was trying to make it mysterious, and I suppose I did it too well. The frustrating part is that I could easily make the short description longer, but that would reveal and ruin the last second surprise at the end of the first chapter.

I'm not certain what to do. Any advice out there? If need be, I can set the password on the story and let folks beta it.

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Thank you for the favorites of my newest story and I hope that you enjoy the rest of my stories as well

The fun that can be had within the limitations of a texts only conversation. You made it interesting, something that made me want to read it more than once, to be certain I didn't miss any nuance.

Thanks for liking Internat Connection! If you don't mind my asking, was there anything about it that stood out to you?

EDIT: Also, thanks for the follow!

Your story "Family Begins With You". I think I'm going to enjoy it while tinkering.

It looks like a good read, and the sirens have always fascinated me.

Thanks for the follow! What about me caught your attention?

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