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EdBecerra


Retired military, retired gunsmith, tired cynic.

Sep
9th
2017

And... D'oh! Foot meet mouth. · 2:22am Sep 9th, 2017

Just got the word that I'd failed moderation again. *sigh* This time for having a short description that was TOO short.

I was trying to make it mysterious, and I suppose I did it too well. The frustrating part is that I could easily make the short description longer, but that would reveal and ruin the last second surprise at the end of the first chapter.

I'm not certain what to do. Any advice out there? If need be, I can set the password on the story and let folks beta it.

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Your story "Family Begins With You". I think I'm going to enjoy it while tinkering.

It looks like a good read, and the sirens have always fascinated me.

Thanks for the follow! What about me caught your attention?

Thanks for the watch and thanks for faving Wolf Tamed

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Hello sir!

I as a fellow relative to a retired Para and RAF soldier myself I respect and salute you!

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I've downloaded an offline copy to my tablet, so that I can enjoy it on the go. It's that entertaining. I can't wait to see where you're going to take this, and how...

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