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jardex22


Just a new brony seeing how deep the hole goes...

Aug
17th
2014

Past Sins Review · 8:40am Aug 17th, 2014

Past Sins, by Pen Stroke, is probably one of the best known stories on Fimfiction, and for all the right reasons. The characters are well written, the pacing kept me wanting more, and it all wrapped up nicely. It's not without its flaws though.

Note: This review covers the most recent revision of the story, which was rewritten to fit into Season 2 continuity.

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No problem. I finished it awhile ago, but it was still in my read later lost for some reason.

Thanks for the favourite on Cards Against Starlight!

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No problem. My policy is to Track while I’m reading, then Fave when I’m caught up. I forgot to do that before.

Thank you for favouriting “Fallout: Equestria Girls” :twilightsmile:

Thanks for the H2O fave! :heart:

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