Past Sins Review · 8:40am Aug 17th, 2014

Past Sins, by Pen Stroke, is probably one of the best known stories on Fimfiction, and for all the right reasons. The characters are well written, the pacing kept me wanting more, and it all wrapped up nicely. It's not without its flaws though.

Note: This review covers the most recent revision of the story, which was rewritten to fit into Season 2 continuity.

Report jardex22 · 431 views ·

The Best Complete Stories I've Read

Five Score, Divided by Four As a fan of the show, I always loved Rainbow Dash and her cutie mark, but I never wanted it to appear on my leg! Now that it has, all sorts of things are getting weird around here. I'm a guy, not a mare! Cartoon ponies aren't real... right? by TwistedSpectrum 277,593 words · 4,091 · 212
Of the Hive After the royal wedding, a new changeling hive makes its presence known and wishs to open diplomatic relations. Twilight decides to use this opprotunity to learn more about them, but ends up getting far more than she bargined for. by law abiding pony 77,660 words · 3,142 · 60
Project: Sunflower As the Earth is under threat, humanity reaches out for one last hope of salvation. by Hoopy McGee 243,094 words · 5,164 · 92
Three Hundred and Fifty The future has everything that any pony could ever want. Twilight Sparkle wants to go home. by Void Chicken 48,448 words · 2,486 · 68
Stardust Can Twilight earn the trust and friendship of people who are by nature suspicious and hostile to anything that isn't 'human'? by Arad 216,600 words · 6,189 · 103