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Aldea Donder


Jun
28th
2020

Chapter Eleven of Alicorn published! · 11:48pm June 28th

Chapter Eleven of Alicorn has been published, and it's a doozy! You can find it here. For those who've been patiently waiting for it, I hope you enjoy it. :twilightsmile:

Until next time!

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I read up through Chapter 10, but I kind of fell off the wagon after that. I haven't read the Change series, so I was sort of scratching my head trying to figure out a lot of the background lore for that 'verse. One of these days I'm sure I'll dive back into it.

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When a Rainbow Dash from another world crash lands near the Badlands Hive, Princess Twilight Sparkle, daughter of Queen Chrysalis, works to find a way to send her home.
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Are you aware of this story? For as invested as you are in Little Flashes, I don't think I've seen you mention it in the comments once.

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Thanks! I really hope so. Feels are what I'm aiming for, so I'm glad I've managed to hit the mark here and there. :twilightsmile:

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The feels are still strong with this story

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Twice as long, I expect you meant to say, and yeah. Alicorn's chapter length is definitely a mistake. If I could, I would go back and give Younger Me a smack upside the head for setting that precedent. Long chapters are just as inadvisable as long paragraphs... I'm sure the chapter length has discouraged any number of potential readers. You aren't the first, and you won't be the last. Ah, well... Life goes on.

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