Bellesmith must perform experimental tasks in order to keep herself and her beloved safe.
When the morning sun rose, my eyes opened to greet the bodies of many ponies in uniforms and berets. I instantly wanted to scream. Every limb attached to me screamed in pain. There was something with my bones. How badly had I been battered? The dragon... where did she go? Where was I? Why wasn't I dead?
I heard voices. I turned to look. There was a village, a series of wooden sheds populated by poor equines in rags. This couldn't have been Silvadel. What was this? Axan... I could have sworn she...
A box. No... a coffin? I was being raised into something. My battered body was laid to rest inside a shiny container. Silver? No... Chaos metal? Oh, this is so not good. Please help me, Luna. I'm sorry Celestia. I have no clue what they are doing to me. Who are they? Who...?
I looked weakly past the shoulder of a pony reaching in. He was detaching my pendant. He was going to take the Element of Loyalty! That was bad! I could die! I could...
Wait... the villagers... why were they being lined up?
I saw a series of unicorns in uniform walking up. Their horns glowed as they raised metal boomsticks and loaded crystals into them. The villagers were tossed together in a cluster, their hooves trembling against the arid rock of the landscape. Fathers knelt by their sons. Mothers clutched their sobbing daughters.
Finally... a tall stallion marched into sight. He tilted his scarred face towards me, one eye glaring unemotionally. Then, with a shrill shout, he motioned towards the line of stallions.
They aimed their rifles straight at the villagers. No...
No... No... No...
Flashes of light. Dizziness. Blood and blood and more blood.
No!
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"Found them all turned to ash," indeed.
Oh my. Finishing tonight?
Stoked :)!
Wow, Shell was even lying then to manipulate Rainbow. Don't trust him!
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He has given his word as a soldier, his personal honor, the only thing he has left. He will keep it.
Workout to follow. You're gonna pay for updating while I'm at work, ):(...
Wow, they did that all along! And they all put the blame on Rainbow! I hope she realizes this.
This is not the end, but it is an end.
Dash, only you can stop this.
Make the right choice.
Yeah, what I said about 5 minutes ago? Never mind. I should have known it was the frwaking Ledoassholes again.
Gah, shoulda known RD never killed anyone like that. Hopefully, that changes about... Now.
It was all a lie.
IIIIIt's Dashie's Tenth Marathon Evaluation Time!
ARE YOU FRICKEN SERIOUS RIGHT NOW??!!
Wow! Wooooooooow! Any shred of respect I had for Shell has just been eradicated. There is no way - NO FRICKEN WAY - that anyone can justify killing a village full of families and children only to blame it on another to make them feel guilty. No way. There's no way.
...You know what? Screw it. I'm going over the ten chapter limit tonight. These are my thoughts so far.
-MASH
P.S. Well, I'm done. But I'll do a bit more. It's so captivating...
Shell! He has sunken to new depths, and I didn't even know that was possible. Homestretch now - onward!
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Shell is loyal, but his loyalty is unrequited. A tragic figure, really, but no less despicable for it.
This is the first time I have felt such hate for anything. Screw love and tolerate, imma kick his ass personally.
God. He killed them all.
This... I... I can't even...
I've written five different comments into this box and deleted them again. I don't even know what I'm feeling anymore. ...IC, I am more than astonished. Your skill really is without equal.
It wasn't her.
It. Wasn't. HER!
There was a point were I could respect Shell.
Then there was a point where I could grudgingly respect his loyalty to his country, even if he was willing to commit war crimes at the drop of a hat.
no more.
Dash, take him down please.
I...I was wrong. Dash didn't kill the villagers! Shell did!! More than ever now Dash, kill him. Kill him and decimate his corpse. I want him so far gone that there's nothing left of him to piece back together.
So Dash didn't kill them? Shell. Shell.
-SPirit
I now hate that I ever even liked this guy as a villain. Shell, your death is imminent.
By this point I have given up trying to count the hundreds of thousands of years Shell will be spending in the sun as Molestia's bitch
my god damn heart
I will die and you will be to blame
and i will love every moment
Sometimes a lie is easier to take, until the truth comes out, then the lie makes the truth even worse.
4759806 I may be nearly a year behind, but I agree 100 percent.
Dang, so it really was Shell all along that took out the village.
Holy hell. Been getting a lot of stuff read today, just no commenting. Shell is such an asshole. I figured that from the beginning, but the last few chapters have cemented that a LOT more than I dared to hope. He'll get his, dammit. I hope.
~SolidFire
*gasps*
SHELL LIED! HE SPILT THE BLOOD
This chapter has nothing more for me to add. My gosh, this chapter speaks for itself, Rainbow Dash is remembering all her adventures or is addled by her confused mind and thinks they’re all coming to save her. I’m also surprised I remember this because I read the prequel about a year ago, but I digress.
That’s about it, there’s really nothing else. Just taking in this grisly scene.
Edit: I apparently missed something, see, this is why you don’t take extreme breaks between reading stories. Shell, not Dash, killed a bunch of villagers that were significant at one point, but I don’t remember.
BASTARD