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Pinkie Pie is trying really, really hard to help Navi. Out of all of his friends she is probably the pony that is trying the hardest. Granted it is partially her fault he is a little messed up.
You seem to make Unicorns really overpowered in this story. They do have spells, but they should have a limit to how they much it can be used.
Sigh... Gettin' draconequus all over my human again bro...
So does "true" magic mean that stop time, go back and forward, ect?
Regardless... you make this story sound like there IS NO good ending; Discord is OP as fuck; With powers that outmatch Celestia's by far; I'm guessing nav has no good ending regardless of the main outcome.
I'm guessing you have some trick in the bag, or Taya goes good and helps Celestia or something, but fat chance with that. In the end, it feels like this...
¤ <-- Celestia's power | Discord's power ---> Five miles thata' way
Taya most likely scarred two children for life and Nav is proud. Cant really say I blame him. Where did Pinkie get a revolver? The steam powered rivet gun is from fallout, right? Wont the technology bring about a change that will resemble human society in some way? Tech does affect the society and the culture as whole.
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Why think about the ending so soon? The way I'm seeing it, this story still has a pretty long way. I'm rather interested to see where else it goes, no matter what happens. This story has a good plot and has been keeping a lot of people pretty interested.
To each his own, I guess. Though Discord does sound a bit OP, but there is still a lot of ground to cover before we can even decide the ending. I'm more worried about all the technological advances. I mean, making plastic? Think of all the pollution that will spread around the peaceful pony land. Once again I have no clue what I'm talking about since this is still pretty early within the story.
Not early, but you know what I mean.
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I'm not really thinking about the ending so much as I want to see something to help someone out who isn't Discord. I like this story because I'm a human loving human, In-fact the only stories I read on this site are human related. The stories I enjoy most of all are where the human ISN'T helpless and has to rely on the ponies 24/7 like our good man Nav here. These kind of stories are quite rare if I do say so myself. While I enjoy where the human can fight back to some extent I never like when one side is too OP. Of course I'm just one reader of many so my opinion doesn't hold much sway unless other readers agree. Regardless, those are the kind of stories I like, and I don't find them to be common. I was thinking of writing my own story but don't really have the time to sit down in front of the computer and actually think and write, also it wouldn't be as enjoyable to read. But if you want to prove me wrong on the whole "these stories are rare" please do, though keep in mind most of what you might link me to I might have already read.
Something I've been wondering; Does Nav know he's discord? Or is it just discord knowing he is Navrone?
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She really regrets what she does and she really wants to see him smile. When it comes to Pinkie, that's a scary combination. And yes, unicorns are overpowered in some ways. I try to keep what they do out of sight as much as possible.
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You can do that with spells as well. It's just harder.As one of the characters put it, true magic is harder to learn but much stronger in the end, while spells are easier to learn but overall they're weaker.
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Pinkie is Pinkie. To her, it isn't a revolver, it's a pie shooter. She got it from the same place she got her cannon. And yes, the steam rail gun is from Fallout. The tech could go any number of ways, depending on how popular and widespread it gets. Yes, Nav probably made a mistake bringing it there.
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I'd like to think we're over halfway there at this point, but honestly not even I know how much longer the story will run. I will say that we have less than ten updates left before I stop updating for a while to catch up writing. Most of my prewritten stuff has been posted. There's a little less than a hundred thousand words left.
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Answering that would be spoilers.
Wait... so complete time control? Sigh, now this OP status is just getting ridiculous. While we're at it lets give him the power to create his own universe.
I understand pause time, or create room that isn't in the time/space slipstream... but complete control X10
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Unicorns have that power. Twilight went back in time in one of the episodes and fucked with the past. It's a known thing. Why is it so bad for Discord to be able to do it? Hell, you say that like you think he isn't smart enough to know not to fuck with the past. As smart and genre savvy as he is, he knows that the only thing that comes with playing with time is pain.
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Wait... as in the actual show? Sigh... that just aggravates me... whatever, I'll just live with it. But I hate when time is treated as something so simple, that it can be bent around ones finger to their liking.
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She wasn't able to spend long in the past and she quickly buggered everything up. It's also a spell that's illegal for the general public to even have access to.
Wait....does this mean that Taya now knows the codeword for unmaking Navarone?
I like this stories alot and I love the way your going about it butits like your wrighting a tragety waiting to happen ... srsly no bad ending please give this poor bastard a break .... like break him into talking with something ....... or he gets an AK-47 ...... again
Ch 50... it was nice.
1913488 why are people hating on ak-47 love :(
That thing with true magic and shit creeped me out…
i was just reading chapter fifty again, with the part about discord teaching true magic to taya, and i suddenly noticed something.
as good as it is to get discords perspective, are these not nav's journals? would celestia not be alarmed to see discord writing in them as if he were nav?
(note: i get they aren't Actually in the journals, its just worth noting)
I get the feeling that his nice, quiet night is going to be cut a bit short.
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Well actually, if you activate what small about of brain cells you have, you might notice that wasin past tense. That means it's already happened. And being a diary/journal means that must hold tru, therefore you are clearly an idiot.
Yes I know Im a dick.
2784987 I think this is kinda something Discord did after he copied them and before he uploaded them to the interwebs.
3021477 'and i'm okay with that'- ?
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*shrug* Those that say time travel is easy never tried it.
Just no practicing it without me around. And I mean me, not Navarone.
Backwards, or just me being a moron? Also, I've figured out my age old question, Nav is Discord. Yaayy..
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I don't see how that would be backwards. And Discord is a liar. Nav may or may not be Discord.
3799444 Two words : Sleep Deprivation. Sorry for messing up, still looking around for errors and commenting on any I think are important. Also, Thanks for replying. It's interesting to actually be noticied. I shall continue to read all night, and comment and mistakes / errors / questions / sporks I find within your story. c:
Sigh... once again, GODDAMMIT TAYA!
ponies took almost a year...well they cheated...technically, because of Nav`s memories, without them, they`re sitting ducks. And Pinkie is just annoying as f***.
Oh please please tell me that's the Railway Spike Launcher from Fallout 3!!!
I love you Taya, but... DAMMIT!!!!!!
I thought the ring was supposed to be immune to all magic, not just spells?
As soon as they mentioned the Railway Gun, I immediately flipped my shit. That was the second time you wrote a reference of Fallout 3. Somebody's a Fallout 3 fan...
Also, no I wasn't angered by it, I absolutely love Fallout 3. ❤
I usually like Discord, but then again, I'm not supposed to in this case
4847973 Don't forget about Fallout New Vegas!
Damnit... I was hoping your ambiguous wording in the chapter where Taya met Discord meant that she chose Nav over him. I can only hope that by the end of this Nav is actually his own person and Taya switches sides. If not, I'm gonna throw a temper tantrum.
So I pretty much just started reading this. Is Navarone Discord's body from the deal with Celestia?
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No navs body is a random humans discord grabbed from earth
I just can't help but think of Mythbusters here.
All of you that think discord is nav your wrong. Nav is a human summoned to equestrian. Taya sees nav as her dad and discord uses that to get to Taya. Discord is saying he is disguised as Navarone. But nav isn't discord, and you can tell this because nav doesn't know how pinkie breaks the fourth wall, but discord does saying she's using old magic. If that doesn't convince you nothing will except for how the story unfolds. Thanks for reading my argument.
4304260 Choo choo!
This is the most awesome headcanon ever. Actually, that's the whole true magic vs. spells thing in its entirety, but especially the part where Discord and Pinkie are the only ones who rewrite reality on a whim.
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If not, the author's life is again (stated before) forfeit.
Again with the racism this and
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/153772/wherein-you-learn-about-birds
Come on man... Actually this time it is funny.
6265107 discord is inhabiting a portion of his mind, not his body
I am confused about this and so is a lot of the other comments that I see. Is Discord, Nav? From what I have read I think it might be a human template that Discord pulled from the past and is using it as his impromptu being to gain favor throughout the world without the being knowing it was Discord because Discord just wants to have fun with a new experience while working towards a goal. That makes more sense in my head... I think?
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His body is actually an, and I think I quote 'old friend' of discords, what that entails is up to you. I think he's actually Prometheus, considering what you learn about gods later on
I honestly hope the changelings stay ahead in the tech race. Very often people underestimate how quickly technology can advance.
7338534 no, Nav is an incarnation Cain, from the bible. In the first chapter, Discord says that Cain is the one that made the persona of Discord.
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7594647 dude, I'm pretty sure it wasn't some historical or religious figure.
All Discord said is that he was a person who was chaotic enough to make himself.
So I figure Nav here actually created Discord
Huh, that theory regarding spells and real magic would serve to explain an awful lot...wait...
Oh, darn you sir! You just provided a way for 'magic' to be a valid explanation for anything unusual!
I love reading Discord's inner ponderings. At first I thought the author was just going to make him a mindless villain with unlimited power that fanfiction writers seem to love so much. He seems like a genuinely nice guy turned apathetic due to immortality.
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Prologue
nav's name for the naga is Cain