Was originally on Lancerot's page, but he has handed over to me to continue, as he is busy with the BS that is life throwing crap at everyone.
Eclipse. That is my name. Or at least now it is. You know how it is, bla bla bla tragic\boring story bla bla bla end of the world, I'm spared you get the gist. I get a keyblade, get sent to equestria but here's the kick in the nuts. I'm reborn as a pony with all my human memories. And I mean re born, out of the womb kind of reborn.
I HAD TO GO THROUGH PUBERTY AGAIN!!!!! Oh and apparently now that I'm 18 again, apparently The entire Multiverse has be on speed dial.....buck my life.
Crosses over with:
Keybearer
A Wielder and His Students
Foretellers
Balance
Life of A Nobody
Chapters (40)
Okay, you have my attention. Make certain you keep it.
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Um. Okay. I'll try.
Did you read the Displaced lore?
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Is it in a displaced group?
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Yes. https://www.fimfiction.net/group/205425/displaced/thread/233699/rules-and-important-thread-hub
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What folder is it in so I can remove it since I feel it does not belong in that group.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/group/205425/folder/35553/the-displaced
I really wish people would understand the difference between the displaced, and being displaced.
I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Just an FYI after Eclipse comes back the color for Oblivion is mixed with Oathkeepers when explaining how long he was "Dead"
Awesome, liked and followed!
keeping it good so far, though I wont be back till December. be safe. and keep writing
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Heh...glad to hear from you man, and thanks. Trying to stick to as much to Eclipse as possible.
Will I need the stories that this story is crossing over with in order to understand this story?
Even I enjoyed this chapter! Nice job Bio!
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Most likely.
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He lives!!
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I also have Xin writting for Wolf as I could not figure him out. XD
gummi ship why is it now that I'm 'rereading this that I think of the ship looking like pinkies pet alligator gummi
Awesome. Time Splicer is strong.
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we do good work
If I could like more than once, I would've done so sooner on more than just this story.
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Holy fuck someone actually commented!
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Indeed! I never let a story I like down!
99th? Thought John was? Isn't Eclipse 100?
Nice chapter
Why? Just why?
Ha ha ha ha ha! Nice!
Ben: Bitch I've been doing all that crap without Admin powers or being a X-blade and I had 20 at the time, now I have 2000, what's your excuse?
Uh what happened at the bottom? Missing text or something?
Hymn ... started reading a few days ago maybe some of these comments are addressed in later chapters ..so as not to ruin it for new readers ill anti spoil block it.... the fact eclipse is getting punished is hypocritical at best he couldve resolved it without making eclipse feel like a criminal ... x has killed how many 1000s 10000s ...millions? how many were pregnant or children with keyblades that were brainwashed into being soldiers. Truthfully i get the impression the only reason x is really punishing eclipse is so hed stop punishing himself but couldve said as repentance you will do this. Next ....The keyblades act like victims they couldve prevented the keyblade war by refusing to fight or by turning against the 4 apostles .... the statement i was just following orders doesnt even fly in reality especially since they are sentient .... next up... if a woman who knows shes pregnant goes sky diving or bungee jumping then loses the baby its her fault ... same here she went into battle knowing she was pregnant .. eclipse didn't.... he saw weakness and took advantage to protect his team from a monster who wouldnt hesitate to bath in their blood ... yah it sucks but it still her fault. Also they should use a futa spell on zeke its only fair he gets to impregnate the masterminds of his dilemma rune and .... unumm? ... misery loves company ...also some of his wives finding it amusing is pretty heartless.... hes not naturally a woman his guy mindset being ripped away is probably traumatizing at the moment .... at least derpy and heart care were their offering support ... bless their hearts. Like i said new reader just calling how i see it this far in the story.
How they get key blades?
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Given to them by God...or do you mean something else?
Well that's a nice fourth wall ending to the story. I can imagine my ponysona self thinking about visiting your version of the MLP universe. Are there going to be other changeling hives in this version of Equestria? If you like you can use my Shadow Hive Kingdom.
Wat?
Welcome to the life of a life based off a kingdom hearts game. Its all complicated
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Lols. XD
Yea in this case it would be film theory
Just finished this chapter and looked at the comments and lol'd that my comments were the first i see xD this rlly was a massive chapter....almost as massive as hondo
W8 is he eating the pudding IN the cup or the actual cup itself( like discord)?
My new favorite quote that i will use wen i stub my pinkie toe in that perfect sweet spot to hurt like hell
Great story. The only thing i didnt like about it is every pony is a keyblade welder, and to many humans.
You Fanboys favorite the villain way too much. That's why crossover suck in fandom stories
Ok, what the FUCK did that woman do to end up in that literal shit pile and what dragged her down!
Younf.
That is all.
Clearly.
That first sentence, I going to start saying now.
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...Friendly word of advice, never, ever do that. Not everyone will want to read all those stories, after all. Does this go for the sequel, as well?
You know, I just noticed this, but Eclipse got the same keyblades as another Displaced, that being Cassiel. If the two authors saw each others stories, and realized that, I wonder if they would team-up, or just discuss the differences between their stories.
I have a feeling Eclipse's gonna regret making that Pinkie promise...
Wait 5 is legal???!!! Ok I just pulled that number out of my @$$ lol