Inspired by Balance and Keybearer.
2012.
The year that was long prophesized on the Mayan Calendar to be the year that the world meets its end.
But what it really was, was a test for mankind...but we failed. Miserably.
But, a selective few have passed the test and were able to move on in another world, me being one of them. God allowed me to have a Keyblade and sent me to Equestria from MLP:FiM, except...it seemed a little different, all of the ponies are anthro, meaning they are humanoid like. After arriving, I noticed the Heartless were running about, and took care of them and the problem.
Princesses Celestia and Luna, the rulers of this land, saw my potential and granted me permission to stay in Canterlot and teach her subjects about the Keyblade.
Yup, this should interesting.
The Photo/Cover, It looks exactly like this combo
Sonic Screwdriver+ Medieval Axe+ (Medieval) Sword+ Demon Theme/Idea/Style+ Bone Theme/Style/Idea
Yus, a new entry in the Mayan Keyblade wielders Genre.
Read these two also dude...
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Balance (This one I wrote
and Keybearer ( I edit this one and the author of this one and I did a crossover chapter where our characters met. (Not-so-subtle-hint)
Pm me if you wanna try it out.
This seems interesting, but weren't the scene with Celestia, Luna and Cadance with the Keybearer a bit too quick? I thought it would at least take more time to get used for meeting with royalty from another world, or at least, Equestria, but that was your decision wasn't it? So, no judgment there.
Expecting more chapters soon.
Tag salad, a human "OC", and Kingdom Hearts...
I'll just slowly back away.
7967078 Huh... it does look kinda like a salad. Weird.
Now I'm hungry.
looks interesting enough
guess i'll keep an eye on this and see where it goes
This has potential, but you need to crank up the fancy. You need to use fancy words and fancy turns of phrase and make the dramatic parts sound more dramatic.
This looks good but slow down a bit, make the character at least get his bearings and less 'i best everything and save princesses' type thing. It's good but just slow it down a bit.
KO awesome chapter, hope Shining Armor understands Cadance's motives and spend more time with her and Devin is facing against a dark enemy!
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KO awesome chapter, Devin is gonna get an earful from Shining Armor about this and looks like Devin has gotten started training the new Keyblade wielders as his adventures continues.
You seem to keep continually failing to mention how the Gazing Eye keyblade is actually damaged/incomplete (I'm not entirely sure which of the two it qualifies as).
When the Master of Masters gave it to Luxu, it had the eye at the tip and an eye at the guard.
When Xehanort had it, it only had the eye at the tip.
When Riku wielded Soul Eater, it had an eye that was very similar set into its guard, and kept the eye when it grew into Way to the Dawn.
Gazing Eye is diminished from its original form.
7976801 Yes, but that information was post-2012. This story takes place near the end of 2012. That fact about the Gazing eye and it's missing eye isn't noticed until Kingdom Hearts X, made in 2015.
7976813 the chronological placement for it in our world is irrelevant.
The X-Blade would know that it's flawed, because of the placement in the Kingdom Hearts timeline.
7976954 Man, when you get the time to write the story you want, PM me. I wanna do a crossover just to see how your character would react to Devin.
7977027 That could be fun.
7977034 3 authors, 1 chapter. The fimfiction crossover only the people following or interested in our stories will know about... (Burst down laughing) That would be fun.
7977050 make that four now
At least this one seems to be keeping the crossovers minimised for now.
It all gets rather convoluted trying to recall who you're supposed to be following and why with the other two.
KO awesome chapter, Devin is off for his exam and the keyblades for each of the mane six are cool and dangerous at the same time! Wonder if Spike is gonna get his own Keyblade as well?
7996609 He will, trust me
Yay! New chapter!
7996617 KO cool will there also be some sex for Devin and his future harem?
7996743 We'll see
7996759 KO hope you get the chance to check my stories like Dojo's Bizarre Adventure and Equestria Girls Bizarre Adventure.
Awesome job with the story!
Keep this flare going! And you wil reach the "Stars"
IT LIVES!
KO awesome chapter, Devin got a lot to do to be ready for the master exam to become a master Keyblade and will teach it to six of students and probably the princess sisters.
This may have been made clear before and I missed it but why is Luna able to administer the Mark of Mastery test if she just got her keyblade herself and would know nothing about them? What gives her the right to bestow the rank of master? I know nothing about Kingdom Hearts so that is why I'm asking
KO awesome chapter, Devin passed his test against three Keyblade fighters and may have suffered mental freak out from his little trip. Hope things will smooth from there.
8025706 I was wondering this myself, only I DO know Kingdom Hearts and that Luna has no right to administer the Mark of Mastery exam.
HA!
8025875 sorry I didn't notice the autocorrect
Of course. It had to be Freddy. I recognized where he was after the lights went out. He should be glad it wasn't nightmare Freddy. Now that's a monster.
Question: How can anyone take Kingdom Hearts seriously?
Man, I was hoping Golden Flare would get back to his Sora in Equestria story.
Thought I would give this a shot.
Jesus Christ I feel like I was covered in Stupid-Sauce reading this.
8114776 no one unless u like final fantasy. It's a good game series but confusing somewhat
Im REALLY enjoying these. It's like the displaced but all kingdom hearts variants. So it's a lot easier to keep track of and doesn't go crazy....much better balanced too :"
Devin ,you poor, lucky dog
I can't help but feel that it's too early to administer the Mark of Mastery.
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Agreed.
I was listening to a remix of Terra's theme from Birth by Sleep while reading the Mark of Mastery. Felt that it was pretty fitting here.
any chance this or Replica will be updated soon?
I hope there will be new chapters soon. Keep up the great work! ^^
9668289 Thanks
Any chance this will be updated soon?
Yay, new chap!
As happy as I am to finally see a new chapter, it was kind of all over the place and I kind of got lost. Was the MC used in any of the other stories in the past 3 years or something? I feel like I'll have to read a few dozen chapters to figure out what's going on.
10347821 Thanks
10348006 Yeah, sorry about that, it was mainly for those who had watched the final season of Samurai Jack and knew what was going to happen, and I was under the impression that pretty much everybody watched it, but I guess my assumption was wrong, apologies
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It's fine, it's actually kind of my fault since that's been on my watch list for idfk.
10348515 It's cool