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Someone new who decided to throw their hat into the ring.

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So worlds coming to an end and I don't particularly care. December 21, 2012 is supposed to be the end and I still don't feel like sweating it. Still I'd rather not run away from it. Unfortunately my own ways worked against me and I met someone powerful who decided I was worth saving. Imagine that. Got new powers in the wing and I can only hope nobody will try to force me into their problems. I'm hoping the other ones who decided to forgo their world won't mind my attitude too much.

May cross over with others when I feel comfortable enough. Story needs to stand on it's own before I decide to do that.

Sex tag mostly for jokes I may make because from time to time I'm probably gonna let the innuendo comments innocently fly by.

Rule number 1:

Never trust others on first sight. Trust is earned never given.

Rule number 2:

If you save someone don't expect them to be grateful for it. Ego is the first killer of the naive.

Rule number 3:

Never use Saix's power at night. There is no control, only madness.

Inspired by:

Keybearer,

Life of a Nobody,

Balance,

A Wielder and his Students,

Foretellers,

Keys of Harmony

First Published
19th Apr 2017
Last Modified
29th Apr 2017
#1 · 1w, 3d ago · · · 2. Badlands ·

Looks good so far.

#2 · 1w, 3d ago · · · 2. Badlands ·

>>8105944 Thanks. I'm gonna be honest... It's hard to write 1st person stories. I've been so inclined to write in the third person throughout everything I've ever wrote and it can be hard to change that on a whim.

#4 · 4d, 23h ago · · · 5.Turbulence ·

Yes please because the trend!

#5 · 4d, 16h ago · · · 5.Turbulence ·

>>8117991 Um... Okay then. I'll fit that in later.

#6 · 3d, 19h ago · · · 6. Assault ·

Gotta say I really like this one so far, has some good pacing and world building compared to some of the others. I look forward to the next one.

#7 · 3d, 16h ago · · · 6. Assault ·

>>8120926 Thanks. I'll admit I was reading the other stories and noticed the pacing was like I was here but now I'm there. I'm taking my time with this and while I will try to crossover with the others I'll do it at my pace and make it work well rather than fast.

Some things I need to get better at before I reach writing those parts...

-Work on giving bad guys more screen time and I mean the normal everyday jerk

- Fit in the Nobodies and adapt them to this story rather than take the ones we know and use them.

-Since BioQuill has the X blade work in the Unversed eventually.

-Romance wise make it actually be romantic rather than what is portrayed in any other story.

I'm thinking of him visiting a world based on Ori and the Blind Forest. As for a reason for him being there, the heartless would go after that world like crows longing for a defenseless corpse. Most likely he'd reach that world after the forest has started dying.

>>8126944 I didn't even think of that. I'm glad you gave me a really good reason as well. I'll consider that world number two to go to. I already have world one and world three as well. I'll keep those a secret for now.

#10 · 2h, 40m ago · · · 9. Castle ·

When I looked behind me at the statue of the elements I noticed several dark tendrils pulling me towards a portal while this very large alicorn wearing blue armor fitted with crescent moons was standing near the portal. She grinned, showing off the fangs in her mouth, and laughed evilly. I remember seeing same eye that had been watching me throughout the nights leading up to this moment. I don’t know what possessed me to say what I said next but I’m sure it would be one of the weirdest moments I have ever had in the history of the universe. That or one of the most embarrassing moments that Nightmare Moon ever had.

“So… are you the whorse who hid the leather saddle and bit in their room or are you just into being whipped like you were once before when they sent you to the moon. You're probably the worst voyeur in the history of voyeurism since even though you saw me you were still screwed over by three other mares I met before hoof.”

I don’t think I’ve ever seen anybody regardless of what they are get that angry. She instantly slammed me into the portal of darkness and came flying straight after me. At least I have her attention though I will have to work on my diplomacy later.

He is a braver/more foolish person than I am.

#11 · 54m, 54s ago · · · 9. Castle ·

>>8129003 I wouldn't he's braver or foolish. I would say he's impulsive. And the first thing that came to mind was the leather gear he found in one of the Princess' bedrooms. He didn't know which one but he decided to roll the dice in this case and let fate take him to his goal. That goal sent him into a hellish nightmare portal of ultimate doom. Fun times for the whole family.

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