Inspired by all of the Anon-a-Miss stories I've read thus far.
You had your heart set on spending Christmas with your family, but fate had other plans. You heard about the MyStable user named, "Anon-a-Miss" and how she posts everybody's secrets online, not to mention that everyone believes that it's Sunset Shimmer who's behind it all. You felt compelled to believe the rumors, but after all that's happened at CHS, you find it hard to even think that Sunset Shimmer could be the culprit.
You decide to find her and see if she needs cheering up this holiday season, and with the help of your family and a little luck, you might be able to, not only save Sunset from a life of loneliness, but find something more within the two of you.
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This was SO AWESOME! I enjoyed this a ton! I'd love it if there was a one-shot sequel! Keep up the fantastic work! I look forward to more awesome fics from ya!
7494840 Thanks
7494866 Sure thing pal!
This was amazing, please make a sequel.
Very noice
Please do make more
7494866 a sequel would be nice making sunset shimmer fall in love with "you" after all you did for her in the end would be nice i reall think this deserves a sequel
Obligatory musical reference;
That was a surprisingly intimate cuddle. Ponies are weird.
sequel please.
I enjoyed this
I say you should do a sequel.
Sequel
Is there a background story so I can figure out how all of this started? Great, really cute story by the way
You should do a sequel, this was good and cute
Hey I just met you
And this might sound crazy
But can we cuddle?
PLEASE HOLD ME TIGHTLY!
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Holy balls I rhymed without even trying! :D
Also nice story, hehe
Sequel pls!
as someone said before me, no pressure, but
SEQUAL. please?..
Sequel Please?
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That said, there is one little problem that nagged at me. When the narrator leaves, nothing that Sunset said should have been heard. It’s not that it’s bad, in a second person story per say, but it’s a pet peeve of mine. You also seem to hit extremes for someone that the narrator has minimal feelings for, and the family takes her in rather rapidly.
Now for the good: your characterization of Sunset (the only person that we have a benchmark for that is around for any appreciable time) was very good considering the stage of her life it was in. You also manage to capture that vague feeling of anger that we have when a friend gets unfairly slandered, that want to do something but not exactly knowing what.
You really did a bang up job with this and if you do a sequel I really look forward to it!
Nice story. I partly imagined him holding the desert box on one hand while slapping the crusaders on his way out the door
Please do a sequel to this story
SEQUEL!!!!!
Sequel please
9503432 Give me some time, I have a bunch of ideas for it, but I need time
Yup, sequel would be appreciated.
Please?
Can you please do a sequel
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there's no sequal is there?
10279094 It's in the works, I just haven't had time
The only thing you got wrong is that When Sunset would've said "Please go away" I would've just said "Okay" and left. Oh Who am I kidding? My dad left me five years ago, my mom never tells me to "wash up" for dinner. And I couldn't tell off Sunset's friends in such a way. It hurts too much.
Sequel?
yes i would like a sequel
I wish for a sequel so badly, it may be short but its one of the best second person stories ive seen along with Holy's works.
10384324 Thank you for the praise, and I enjoy Holy's works as well, but a sequel will have to wait until I can get more time to myself to work on it, and yes, it IS in the works, I just haven't had a mountain of free time. Again, thank you for your kind words, I try to do my best with Second Person stories
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horray
buh buh dadada
in a weird voice, it was from a channel that went south for me it was funny but now its merch merch merch change change change
less and less Mario and comedy if you know tell me its a riddle in a way will you play this game ( i tried to rhyme it crashed and burned )
I’m up for a sequel. Good job here.
Hey, how about one with Forgotten Friendship, where the reader, despite not remembering, helps Sunset Shimmer regain their good memories of her?
Sequel??
The story was pretty heartwarming...
Pretty please?
If you would let me finish, I’m here to be your guardian!
nice