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Pete100


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3030344
Yea. I might need to, be airs either I didn’t see it or I forgot what the old chapters looked like.

3030340
Yes. Want to read it over again?

3030323
Well, if i'm being honest, all that was changed was text that told the reader what was going on inside Twilight and Spike's thoughts inbetween the dialogue of the two of them as Spike was dying in Chapter 1, there was only one word added to Chapter 2 in Smolder's speech, and, in Chapter 5, I changed the dialogue during the confrontation inbetween Stalight and Chrysalis.

3030321
It was alright. Although, I didn’t see many changes, but I probably wasn’t looking hard enough.

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