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Gladly, I enjoyed the plot a lot with it being a sort of a unique premise and I'd say from a plot stand-point, you pulled it off. However, the actual writing part is a has a bit to be desire if I may say. The whole story has been told in sharp-shots of sequences sort-of strapped together by single lines of 'then this happened' forcing the reader to sort of read ahead in the story and supressing the magnitude and gravity of some situations that would have given the story a real flare.

Over-all, if I was to describe the story to someone in a pre-view type style, It would sound really cool, but in the actual story, it seems a bit rushed.