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Golden Flare


I love to create stories.

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Inspired by Undertale.


You were the most ostracized student at Canterlot High School, all because of Sunset Shimmer. She spread rumors about you and even your closest friends abandoned you, never to be near you again. Ever since then, your grades have been dropping drastically, not having the drive to continue trying.

One night, you prayed to whatever god was out there for a way to change your fate, something, anything, to repair the damage done to you. Somehow, your prayers were answered as you now have the ability to "SAVE your progress", like in video games. With this power, you're able to make mistakes, go back, or "LOAD", and start over again, but to do things right.

But as the age old saying goes, "With great power comes great responsibility". When great dangers arrive at CHS's doorstep, it's up to you to undo the damage that isn't your own. But there will be others who will seek your power, and more importantly...

...Where did this power come from?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 43 )

Option three. Resolve it.:twilightsmile:

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also interesting story

Choice three.

thou tempted to for him to get revenge on them or so.
Make them Teachers and Principals shame for not beliving him on Sunset.

This is good so far. And I always wanted a story like this.

I would go with three just to see the outcome, then try to fix it.

I would go with three just to see the outcome, then try to fix it.

Option three. I have high hopes for this story.

7853176 No, it was just an idea I came up with, I haven't even played Dead Rising yet

Does this story have any characters in it that are Undertale Expies?

I'm liking where this is going. At least this guy thinks about the outcome of the different events.

I'm liking where this is going. At least this guy thinks about the outcome of the different events.

This is interesting, curious to see where you take it.

Might as well choose three, I have no relationship with them whatsoever.

Before I read, is it supposed to be unclear who's perspective this is from? Because it seems like it's either Trixie's perspective or from Frisk's.

7958029 It's supposed to be the reader's perspective

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The story's concept is good, but the pacing is rushed. I just hope it improves later on.

I bet everyone would love to have that power...

OUCH! Both end with a very bad ending and I'm sure will get worst, Could see Sunset taunt him for what he done.

noone, I would try to solve their problem

is he doing geno or paci?

Option Seven: Take this Save/Reload power to the wonderful world of online gambling. WE VEGAS NOW, BABY!

MEANWHILE

MOUNT EBOTT


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"...Ha...ha..."

"Hehehe..."

"So...there's a fool out there who wants to change their fate, eh?"

"Hehehehehahahahahaha!! Fine then! You'll get your wish, kid!"

Suddenly, all the yellow sparkles, also known as SAVE points, in the Underground zoomed out of the mountain and into outer space, heading to a different world. The sinister voice chuckled in the darkness.

"Now, let's see what happens! I hope this kid is more fun than Frisk was!"

I'm pretty sure we all know he was and now is.

...Flowey...

Why does the choice remind me of OFF (Minus Option 3)

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I hope he'll do a bit of both

Just got here, is this story gonna be updated anytime soon?

Well so far this story appears to take the path based on the choices we made. For now we are still on the pacifist route. Also, when will this story get updated. I understand that life is busy and all, but I would like to know when you can update this story.

Never have I wanted something so badly and not known that it existed.

CANTERLOT HIGH SCHOOL
YEAR 201X

So-o-o last decade :rainbowlaugh:!

We'll fondly remember the 10-s...

You look at the clock and notice that it's late morning, so late that the sun hasn't risen yet.

Didn't you mean "early morning"?

I can't help but wonder: how old are we supposed to be :rainbowhuh:? Below ten? Below thirteen?

After homeroom was over, you headed for your 1st Period, the one you dreaded so much: Gym.

"Gym"? But that... was a lesson... Didn't you mean "PE"?

As for the question in chapter 3: let us choose RD.

Must say: life is not like a game. I don't believe screens appeared. Unless we could see them with some special vision... But even then...

Also: sparing does nothing until yellow. To spare enemies, one must act. Remember the froggit: "If you act a certain way... they may want not to fight you..."

But... Applejack... isn't a monster... Surely this can't be happening!..

Hum... If this were a recreation of "Undertale", but with "Equestria girls", that'd be cool! The ideas are fresh, and the battles would make much sense!..

However the game mechanics are not applied in this case. "Undertale" would be different as not a game -- for life is not a game. We wouldn't "press buttons", even if fights worked just like in "Undertale"! Rather we'd decide to perform an action: to fight, to act, to use items, to spare yellow-named enemies or to flee. Also enemies' attacks would, as I imagine, hurt our feelings...

In any case, seeing it, as this is yet unfinished, I'll await further updates.

Curious on what will happen next?


Where's Spike too?

I was thinking that the 6 Girls would be part of 6 human souls..

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