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Once upon a time, a merchant was going to set up a stall in a convention to sell enchanted artifacts to cosplayers in order to send them to a variety of iterations of a particular world for honestly rather stupid reasons.
He was probably expecting somebody familiar with the RWBY series--especially Blake Belladonna.
He was not expecting me.
So, yeah, things got off to a weird start...
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First time doing a Displaced story?
I'm honestly impressed! Hope to see more of this!
Btw, be prepared for trolls and the like...
At that point, your best suggestion to take up... Run.
For someone who's also doing a RWBY displaced, I'm liking how this is going. Can't wait to look out for more, Mr. Weaver!
This is good. I like it!
You're off to an excellent start. Btw, as Prim pointed out, be prepared to face those types of people, especially haters who will bash your work without trying to provide constructive criticism
I thoght the title was making this out to be a crossover with "Black & White: The God Simulation Game"
Interesting thus far. Definitely looking forward to seeing where you go from here.
Best backstory ever!
You did it! You made Displaced readable!
It may not appear to be a comedy, but it totally is.
This is shaping up very positively.
Yayifications for wolfgas! ERm.. and the story. Looks like fun, Weavs.
Pretty good for a first time displaced fic
My friend linked this to me, saying I may have inspired it with I Burn. I can see the resemblances he saw, and there are a good number. RWBY, wrong person sent via weapon, psychedelic dimensional trip, falling from the sky, becoming female, having no combat skills to speak of, and having no idea what's going on at first.
We should do a crossover in the future.
Also, have a fave and thumbs up.
Interesting....
have you figured out the cat powers yet?
climbing/running up vertical walls/trees skills (treetop hideout to escape from groundbound foes), practically perfect nightvision (saves on electricity bills for lights), extra agility and leaping skills (par for the kourse) extra keen hearing (eavesdropping powers activate!) that sort of thing?
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It'd be interesting if Yang was the one to explain the "Displaced" situation to "Blake" or whatever she ends up calling herself if she doesn't remember her name like Yang.
8268310 It could be that the Blake in this story's original name was also Blake. It is a name that's useable for both genders after all.
An author who is actually talented writing a Displaced story? What his this world come to?
I'm definitely impressed! You're doing an amazing job with this!
Hah, the first Displaced story I'm appreciating (well, except the Lacan one).
Great job
So far this is pretty good. Great job
This is beautiful, and glorious, and an absolute joy. MOAR
Nicely done. Can't wait to see more.
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It is good. Very good. Keep at it.
I thought that was where you were going with the manticores. Consider me flattered.
Looking forward to more.
Zebra mom is best mom
For this line alone you deserve at least half an internet.
An interesting take on the displaced genre, someone unfamiliar with what they've become and thus gives a fresh start for a person not only unprepared to be spirited away but forces them into self discovery on their new body with no frame of reference.
Good to see another like this
Wait till you see the What outside the forest
Hee hee hee, can't wait to see what happens!
Probably the best displaced I've seen. Not saying much, but it may actually turn out to be.. interesting.
.....Ok, I'm interested
Ah, zoologist Fluttershy. A sadly rare sight, but I'm always happy when I spot her. Hopefully she'll help Briar survive the first brush with Pinkie.
The ads on this site are getting disturbing, I'm enjoying this chapter and suddenly greeted by a promotion to some sort of... rape simulator?
The hell Fimfic
Here's to another amusing chapter. Plase, do keep it up, but, you know, a little faster. Just a little.
Great as usual.
....Raccoons...eh, close enough...
Well hello, aggressive foreshadowing. How are you today?
In all seriousness, nice job with the story so far. Onwards!
Nice opening! This kept popping up in my feed, so I felt like taking a look! The description is good too!
Chessboards... Reminds me of JAGS Wonderland...
Oversaturated Reference!
Everfree forest > Everfree Forest ?
Well, that was a fast update. I like that speed.
Yeah! Pajama Manticores! Badass Zecora! Soo much!
Bioanalysis! And she got it wrong! Interesting!
Also Pinkie Pie. I expected Pinkie first, but Fluttershy makes so much more sense.
We don't actually know how similar to Earth, Briar's original universe was... Hmm...
... TITLES! They're all one word! ... I wonder what the next one will be!
That would be a pretty surprising Pinkie, especially with someone that doesn't know about MLP.
Hmm... What with the AUs, Pinkie Pie's bloody body might be an AU version of her...
What might Twilight reveal, will Discord reveal anything... What's it like on the other side of the mirror... Questions, questions...
Weird Idea - Pinkie Pie is accidentally shot by Briar while they're doing Gunsword Testing.
Typos:
Pinkamena [?]
Tuesdays, It's Wednesday.
Sugarcube Corner
Hmm... Seems things are gonna turn sour as the story progresses...
His Parents must have been expecting a girl, and decided to be Asses
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Or they were so indecisive, they just chose something vague and sorta feminine
Brilliant as always.
...let me guess, she will be bleeding because of a papercut, or a thorn or something nonlethal....
Hmm. I suppose we'll just have to see how that foreshadowing pays off when it does. For now, I'm with Fluttershy. Definitely best to limit this to those ponies who might actively contribute to a solution. And those who are going to show up inevitably.
Also, I can't help but suspect that the only way for Pinkie to surprise Discord would be to do nothing.
What is he?
If she looked up while in the map room, she would've realized she's under one too
Update! Yay!
Now to once again patiently wait for the next chapter.
Awesome work as always!