An accident reveals a secret that nopony ever knew....
Inspired by this picture.
[img]http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a331/brittmcgee/MLP%20Minecraft/TLSOA_zps2aa17c49.png[/img]
![http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a331/brittmcgee/MLP%20Minecraft/TLSOA_zps2aa17c49.png[/img]](http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a331/brittmcgee/MLP%20Minecraft/TLSOA_zps2aa17c49.png[/img]){kind=link}
Chapters (2)
- Member Since 10th Jul, 2011
- offline last seen Jul 24th, 2022
Masterweaver
Just an average insane brony, doing average insane things. Professional Fanfiction Writer and Purveyor, relevant links are on my profile page.
Masterweaver
Joined 10th Jul, 2011 ·
Offline
Sequels1
-
Masterweaver · 15k words · 1,233 21 · 17k views
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Masterweaver · 15k words · 1,233 21 · 17k views
- PajamaHam · 26k words · 1,293 44 · 20k views
- Airstream · 4.4k words · 1,914 28 · 18k views
- Ninestempest · 8.1k words · 1,169 17 · 18k views
- Zephyrus Scary · 25k words · 1,020 20 · 14k views
- GrassAndClouds2 · 13k words · 1,973 32 · 26k views
- SilentBelle · 70k words · 2,071 29 · 28k views
- SilentBelle · 11k words · 1,056 12 · 17k views
Featured In17
Twilight's Library6,279 stories ·4,829 members
Children of Equestria1,523 stories ·1,038 members
- Rarity & Sweetie Belle500 stories ·255 members
Sweetiebot154 stories ·711 members
FiW: Friendship is Witchcraft48 stories ·282 members
- Robots In Equestria209 stories ·402 members
- My reading list1,829 stories ·1 members
1000 Likes and Growing3,173 stories ·1,049 members
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.05 seconds
Total duration
852 users online
1,402,168 hits today, 1,989,728 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Do you know, I actually began writing this before Curiosity Maintenance Crew?
Anyway, this is just me doing a serious exploration of Sweetie Bot as a character. And really... what's there to say? I don't think that people are defined by their species or lack thereof, but by their personalities. Heck, you're reading this on a site devoted to fictional quadrupeds with biologically improbable genetic castes who nevertheless have a mostly equal social system and somehow develop specialized individual abilities upon puberty which causes the abrupt appearance of a mark on their bodies.
But if you met a pony, wouldn't you consider them a person?
Does this unit have a soul?
But seriously, this was good.
Damn, this story is good.
Has this got something to do with FiW?
Wow, that was really good.
A sentient, emotional robot... in a dumpster?
So, Sweetie Belle is a Chobits! That makes sense! :D
Well... now THAT was a strange
story... but a sweet one.
Awww.
I'm not sure what to label this as:
Short and sweet, Short and sad, or Sad and sweet.
Aww~
CUTIE MARK ACQISITION PROGRAM
That was.....nice
YOU FOOL
DON'T LET HER KNOW SHE'S A ROBOT.
Interesting.
Good job, it was weird, but a good weird. I liked it.
963712>>963699>>963662>>961408
How about a reading of SWEETIE BOT'S MANUAL?
Who throws away a perfectly good robot?
ENCORE!!!
Sweetie Bot is best Robopony
963736
Please don't advertise in the comments. Only the author is allowed to do that.
Wonderful.
Very good and touching story.
963736
HOW ABOUT YES
963751
Why? Sweetie-Bot fics is rare and hard to find, more the merrier!
963751
I know.
I'm shamed.
But hey, might aswell figure out how she works.
The first child to come with an instruction manual, and someone threw her out.
Horrible person/people.
I'm glad Sweetie-Bot - er, Belle - has a loving family.
And such wonderful friends.
As for next nightmare night... Carefully remove the skin and she can go as a robot!
Okay, that was a little tactless, but the principal stands. And, best of all, her friends would still be her friends.
The only issue I have with this is that throwing a functioning robot into a dumpster seems like an awfully silly thing to do. I can see a sympathetic creator raising her themselves or putting her up for adoption, but I imagine a cruel one just breaking her down for parts. But this is a very sweet story. Did I detect a hint of Kamina in Scootaloo's speech?
963930
The only thing I know about Kamina is that his glasses ended up in Homestuck.
Enjoyed 100%. This was one of the better stories I've read. Only under Her Weight In Affection. Good job. One stache for you!
This story was really touching.
961408
>But if you met a pony, wouldn't you consider them a person?
But of course! Personhood has nothing to do with biology (or in this case, mechanics).
You know, I rather consider this work mis-tagged. I would call it bittersweet at most, but then there's no tag for that, nor for touching .
An interesting move, not having the parents know. I didn't see that coming, nor Pinkie's interest in robotics. The latter seemed a bit forced, but given that that's literally my only complaint I'll let it slide.
Well done. Liked and faved.
I never thought of it that way. I really felt the emotion between Rarity and her supposed sister, and Pinkie's knowledge of robots was a great combination of humor and usual Pinkie-ness.
5/5, my good brony.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png God dammit, I was working on a story like this too. Though i don't think my writing will ever compare to this author's dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Soarin_dayum.png
964157
MY EGO IS SATISFIED
In all seriousness, though, there aren't that many Sweetie Bot stories out there. Which is a shame since she's such an interesting concept and character. So keep at yours!
964174
A great shame indeed.
964174 Yeah, I definitely will. Just gotta make sure I don't do what I usually do when it comes to technology in a story. Since I work with robotics, computers, hydraulics, and other technology, I tend to REALLY over-complicate things in a story. Gotta watch that dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png
I support Oreon's movement.
Sweetie Bot is awesome - just like this fic.
Oh yeah, I like this.
This is really good. If you wanted to, you could continue this, there's plenty of things to go with. But regardless, great story
So awesome!!! Make a sequel please!!!!!!!
961408 Great story!
and yes i would consider them, as well as any sentinent being, as a person. For that is what makes us human in the first place. Sentience, being self aware, and all that. Also, really loved the Sweetie Bot concept. i also noticed that sweetie belle is put in the weirdest situations and/or has the most odd of abilities. like this one story i saw called Like Me, where Sweetie Belle had found her talent to be - oh wait i should mention this first:
google.com/imgres?q=Spoiler+alert&um=1&hl=en&biw=1279&bih=614&tbm=isch&tbnid=Nrm4ovx8pRXWcM:&imgrefurl=http://500motivators.com/motivate/me/warning-spoiler-alert/&docid=7bYpjYSh7TisoM&imgurl=http://500motivators.com/plog-content/thumbs/motivate/me/large/458-warning-spoiler-alert.jpg&w=599&h=479&ei=KYgPULnbPKGS6wHZhYDwBQ&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=112&vpy=85&dur=884&hovh=201&hovw=251&tx=145&ty=116&sig=113810354029122634301&page=1&tbnh=118&tbnw=154&start=0&ndsp=22&ved=1t:429,r:8,s:0,i:114
Ok. As i was saying, Sweetie Belle finds out her talent to be able to know When and how ponies are going to DIE! Weird huh?
P.S. Please make a sequel of this!! I think that the others Crusaders' reaction to this would be good!
Okay, I'll gladly see reaction of CMC to Sweetie beings robot, but if you aren't going to do it that's okay too
For now it's perfect as one-shot, maybe too short for my tastes, but great nonetheless. Keep it up!
As Rarity says IDEA. Instead of a human (biological variety) in Equesteria how about
Data (Star Trek N. G.) in Equesteria. He and Sweetie Bot ought to be friends right off.
First refusal given to MasterWeaver. After that its open to anyone. Rarities answer to who Sweetie Bot is comes out much like Jean- Luc's about Data. Good story, would like to see more about her adapting to this knowledge.
This is a fantastic little fic and I don't really consider it all that sad. The middle bits, sure, but by the end Sweetie and everypony who knows her seem willing to accept who she really is now that they know.
I think there's plenty of opportunity for a sequel, too. I liked how you arranged for Sweetie Belle to slide into pony society without even her parents knowing what she is, but it leaves the question of where exactly she came from open - somepony built her, and somepony dumped her in that dumpster for some reason. Pinkie's freaky knowledge of robotics raises some interesting questions too (though oddly enough it fits well with her character given her predilection towards "crazy contraptions" in the show) but I'm sure the only way to find out the full truth is via the Cutie Mark Crusader Robot Detectives Yay!
964174 964157
I think that the idea of Sweetie Bot could and should be extended into a whole concept.
I came up with this idea a while ago:
i.imgur.com/bqw0c.png
Cyponies. Created by a mysterious company known as Factory Gen. The Cyponies have been found all across Equestria; many of them found have had some sort of robotic defect.
(Note that what I just stated above was BEFORE I read this story, but it's cool because in your story you had that Sweetie Belle was found, which links perfectly with my idea on Cyborg Ponies, or Cyponies.) I just wanted to put that out there, because I am fascinated by the concept as well, and I am very delighted that you have a similar fascination
971533
Did you just make the image or is there a story of some sort? Cause it's linking nowhere.
971566
I made the image for the story, but I didn't published the story yet. But, even though, I just found it very entertaining how you provided a sort of background to Sweetie Bot.
971585
Even better, I know where she comes from.... well, in my CMC story anyway. This is good as a standalone or a prequel.
971591
Is Curiousity Maintentance Crew the story that you are referring to?
971612
Yep.
971618
I am reading it right now, just to let you know.
And also, I will submit my story soon; you've inspired me to continue working on it.
My god..this was amazing
I'm always a sucker for happy endings, and this was no exception. Seeing the family continue on with being sisters and still loving each other made my day today. Thank you.
Freakin' beautiful...
Wow, you took Sweetie Bot and you... made it into something that can make a man cry.
Absolutely beautiful, here.
This was beutiful, man. All we need now is a Scootaling story and I'll have the whole set!
Sparkle-Twilight... Does this... unit... have... *thud*
1017657
Sorry what? I don't get the reference.