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Sweetie Belle is compelled to learn magic after Rarity promises to teach her the finer art of dressmaking, but only once the young filly has learned the basics of magic. However, learning magic comes with its own set of complications and bears an unforeseen gift that will change Sweetie Belle's life forever.

Here's a one-shot sequel that takes place four days after Scion of Chaos: An Emerald Treasure

And this is a Multi-chapter sequel that takes place 5 years after the events of SoC and AET: A Heart of Change

Here's a poem that's based around the character Red Timber. (Not necessary to read for the comprehension of the storyline): Red Timber

Special thanks to SameAsUsual for letting me use his art: http://sameasusual.deviantart.com/art/Ultimate-Sweetie-Belle-340226445. And to ShadowBro for adding in the title and cropping the image.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 916 )

I can just tell, this is going to be epic:eeyup:

Heh, anagrams, huh Discord? Never ceases to amaze.

Wanderer D

Yes! More Sweetie! Nice first chapter, I enjoyed the details on magic and how Sweetie interacts with it! :twilightsmile:

Oh wow, my story is getting a better response than I had ever hoped. I must be doing something right. Let's see if I can keep this up.

...Welp, time to go after that Discord statue with a sledgehammer. Grind it to dust and all. *grunt!*

..Oh, also, tracking this target. Wonderful story. :P


426988 you smash the lord of chaos...i smash everything you hold dear mortal

:raritystarry: You don't even know the amount of love I am giving you right now.

I may not be able to quantify its value but I can feel it :unsuresweetie:
In all seriousness, though, thanks for reading. Expect a new update on Sunday :twilightsmile:

I have been looking forward to the continuation of this story!

So far very interesting.:pinkiehappy:

It's just getting better! Great writing skills! :twilightsmile: I'm enjoying this.

^^What he said. This story is intriguing, and you are a very good author. I am greatly enjoying this.:twilightsmile:

Ok so Crackpot Theory of the Story: Discord is channeling off all magic cast upon Sweetiebelle so he can eventually break free of his prison.

Or unlocking Sweeties "Hidden Talent" of siphoning of f magic for herself.

Either way, great story so far.

Yes indeed. Now if only it would come a little faster...

Thank you, to everyone who has read the story so far. You can expect the story to update every two weeks. With working six days a week, it's all I can manage at the moment. But who knows, maybe I'll get faster as I get more experience.

Very good so far love the update.

Rainbow magic, huh? Wait 'till Scoots sees this.

Was that Gilda gone feral? :rainbowhuh:

New Spell Acquired: Eldritch Storm :ajsmug:


Nope it wasn't a gryphon, they don't hoot like an owl. But if you did through a monster manual, I'm sure you'll be able to find the creature that matches the description. Alternatively, it will be cleared up in the next update.:twilightsmile:
In any case, thanks for reading and leaving a comment, it means a lot to me.

719024 Oh, that was quick. I always found them to be one of the most entertaining monsters around. :pinkiehappy:

719056 They're on the cover of those D&D game boxes I see in the bookstore near my house :rainbowlaugh:
Hard not to tie in refs for me :twilightblush:

God Dammit, now I have to wait until the next chapter, :raritycry: On a post note, I love how your version of Discord, Scoddri for all those who wish it, alude to the past without referring to himself. For sure one of my favorite fanfics.

765385 Oh wow, thanks so much for the high praise. As this is my first multi-part piece of writing, I'm always worried about how well each chapter will turn out. I'm very glad that you enjoy the story, and I hope to improve my writing as I continue. :twilightsmile:

I just want to know what will happen to Sweetie Belle. What is your plan Scoddri? Also nice mixing of letters with the name.

I think I'm finnaly going to fave this. It's getting pretty good.

wow. how was this fetured
i am not saying in anyway that this doesn't deserve to be fetured,
however 33 likes seems a little low

Holey moley, I never expected it to get featured, of course I don't know the exact algorithm used to determine what the feature box chooses.
Well in any case that's pretty sweet :yay:

Nice, nice! I really enjoy Discord's last line. Ahem, I mean, Scoddri.... Yeah. :trollestia:

I am enjoying this berry, berry much! :twistnerd:

And that's how Equestria was saved... By Discord. :pinkiegasp:

It got featured? I must have missed it. Well, if we continue to hold it at 0 dislikes, it might happen again! The story certainly deserves it.

426988 ...I actually read a fanfic once in which Spike did just that...Except that it was a magical sledgehammer, and he chose not to smash Discord into dust at the last second.

I'm waiting for the others to find her fort at some point. This is really well worded and well done but still. But then again build up is very important and so far there's been plenty of that so I'll wait for the next part with excitement!

Great chapter. I love the backstory, and the new look at Discord, plus his origin story.:yay:dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png

WOOO! Magic and confrontation! I await the next installment eagerly!

Using Parchment in books? BIG no no, Given that Parchment is made from Calf Skin (Or sheep or goat). I know it Sounds like a Good replacemnt to make something seem old, But I honestly doubt anypont would be comfortable with the idea of anything written on Dead Children's skin. The same problem exists with Vellum, another Pre-paper Paper substitute.

This chapter reminds me of the scene in Eldest where Eragon is learning how to harness natural energy. I'm anxious to see what Sweetie does with this power. :raritystarry:

Our young Sweetie continues her magic training and learns of "Chaos Magic"
This story continues to be very interesting.

More please! =P

You're using the tags "said, muttered, asked, etc." too much in your fic. Not every piece of dialogue needs to be followed by these tags. These help clarify who's speaking, but aren't really necessary if the reader can draw the conclusion them self. This sort of came to me after I had read the chapter, I'm guessing the reason I didn't see it at first was just from the excitement of the update. It looks like you put a lot of time into this chapter.

Thank you for the feedback, it's always appreciated, I'll keep it in mind as I keep writing. I will keep updating it every two weeks; however, since I have started writing this story, my writing has been getting quicker. Maybe in the near future I'll get them out every week, but what's most important is that people are enjoying it.

Thanks for reading,

Well, there was one section where I was ready to punch my computer screen if I had to read the word magic one more time, but this was a pretty good chapter.

I do wonder, though, if Scoddri will show his evil side when Sweetie Belle is confronted by her friends...:unsuresweetie:

A monkey wrench thrown into her plans? Yes! Now things shall get interesting once again! Great chapter!

Just finished reading this and all the previous chapters, I'm quite delighted that I found this story.

I am very pleased that you find it worthwhile. Thank you for reading. :twilightsmile:

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