"I-I don't know how to say this..."
"Sweetie Belle, you can tell me anything! That's what sisters are for!"
Rarity finds a secret hidden deep within her family tree through Sweetie Belle: a secret that would change her life forever. Now, she must travel to parts of Equestria nopony has ever been before, or at least she thinks, to solve the greatest mystery that was ever put into her hooves.
Proofread by Hoops
Takes place before Crusaders of the Lost Mark.
Uh...
Potassium.
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Iron
Sodium
Calcium
Vitamin D
Vitamin C
...
This storyline has a lot of potential. Good job so far. Tracking to see where it goes.
Loved it!!!!! I was wondering if I could help proof read your next chapter
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Sure!
I don't use Google Docs to write, so do you know a way that you can proofread on this site? (I'm really nooby to the whole editing thing. )
6498741 I don't use google docs either. All you have to do is PM me a the chapter link. If you have a password u gave to send password as well. Password being to pre read. Not account password
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Alright! Thank you!
I'll send you the next chapter when I'm done writing.
Thanks! I will give you credit on the main summary of the story after the next chapter is published!
6498789 Ok!!!
One more thing, I won't be able to edit, or delete anything, so I will post in comments using the quote button. Another thing is, write like 200 words then PM me it. It's easier. Plus it decreases the chance of me missing something.
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Will do! Once again, thanks!
6498815 your welcome! I will always read after I get home from school. I'm better than my brother who he gave this account to me after he couldn't keep this and do homework XD
6497033 Water.
Lipids.
Carbohydrates.
Protein.
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I would remove the modifier "red" since it seems like ether teading glasses or the glasses are tinted red.
The intro seemed a bit rushed, bit it's a nice premise, tracking...
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What he said. What are you talking about?
Does this story have changelings in it?
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It will have other changelings in later chapters.
Let the changing... BEGIN!!!
goooooood....
*rubs hands in anticipation*
Might want to change the editor thing :D
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Yeah, I probably should.
So...
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Oh my gosh, is it bad I kinda forgot about this story?
If you're going to ask when I'm updating next, I'm actually about to start on the next chapter. I just read through the outline I wrote and got inspired, haha
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Nah