• Member Since 16th Feb, 2012
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SilentBelle


I'm a fantasy enthusiast who loves to write, and I'm aiming to be a professional fantasy writer eventually. I love to help out other authors when I can. Feel free to PM me or drop by and say 'hi'.

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Applejack tells a story she holds close to her heart.

A first-person(pony?) narrative from AJ's PoV.

Inspired by the cover image created by CrazyRainbow0, who is awesome for letting me use it.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

I love your attention for detail. It's what makes you describe how Sweetie perceives magic/the world around her in such a satisfying way. Like your previous works, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. You portrayed AJ's pent up frustrations really well and made me curious about what happened to the sibling's parents. Also about how bored Apple Bloom must have been while AJ was in Manehattan.

Wow, this is... sad. And heartwarming. And has three likes with two views.

The intro reminds me of the series Animorphs for some reason.

This was great! Short, but sweet and emotional. Nice story, even if I don't like AJ much.

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I've always found my favourite fantasy series' to be consistent in their details (especially when it comes to magic). I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Lovely as always, even if it was sad it was good to see AJ finding her strength and coming to terms with things :ajsleepy:

Very good.

This was pretty good. I love how short your fics tend to be, it took me all of ten minutes to read this. Quite a bit of character packed in their, though. Good job.

I feel all fuzzy and warm inside now. That was a very sweet story.

3112943 Aw, thanks. It was a fun story to write.

I really liked it.
Sweet, simple, in character. ..

My smile grew as the fire flies danced over apple bloom.

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