Twilight Sparkle and friends spend a peaceful evening together playing cards.
That is until their future selves decide to show up to stop them all from ruining their lives.
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naturalbornderpy
Just a nice, polite Canadian.
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Discord actually becomes a good person? Anyway, great story, especially with the way time travel was done in a way that makes no sense at all.
I assume your name is Brendan, author, and your day job is at a Best Buy.
I absolutely lost it when the spray bottle came out though.
I hope Rainbow Dash and Rainbow Dash have a happy Awesome life together
So, wait a minute...you didn't answer the most important question! Did Rainbow Dash and Rainbow Dash get married and live a happily awesome life together awesomely ever after?!
If that's not answered, I'm downvoting!!!
(Just kidding, have an upvote)
There is a million words in the English language, and no combination of them can express how much I liked this story!
is that a Moonlight Palaver reference?!
But sadly because of their future selves spoiling the future, none of the told advents will come to pass. I would go into long, detailed explanation of why, but all I have to say is...The same thing happened with back to the future will happen.
Oh, and Blub Blub would make an excellent spin-off!
Brendan needs his own story!
Oh that got a good laugh out of me, thanks for the fun story.
Brendan from Best Buy is my spirit animal.
I'm usually not a fan of Looper-esque flux time traveling mechanics, but it's comedy so anything goes (and it goes rather well here).
Great story.
Best part.
And I think I speak for a handful of people (enough people to be counted on one hand) that further adventures of Discord and Blub Blub would be swell.
edit: I upvoted, but maybe you'd like a downvote instead. It matches mine.
7845920 shame on whoever downvoted you for saying first...
To make things better have an upvote.
I liked the story quite a bit, funniest part for me was Discord's prank on himself
Not First, but not last!
And for the second story, Twilight goes into the future to yell at herself for not being fun!
The hell did I just read
7/10
img15.deviantart.net/76cd/i/2015/239/3/8/strip_poker_by_hillbe-d97fklx.jpg
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Would you settle for a mere few closely related words to express your enjoyment of this written work? If so, may I recommend 'I love it!'?
Why, Discord. Why would you do that to yourself? Why Canada?
This was hilarious! Nicely done. Any quibbles I had were very minor. Though I would nix the 'for some reason' bit after the fake mustache, if only because it's already apparent Fluttershy is wearing it because she's just that bad at reverse strip poker.
Oh, please, no, the fandom's made that enough of a bad joke already.
Run, Discord, run!
...oh, God, I hope Celestia doesn't find out about this.
Aaaaaaand, here come the people asking if it's masturbation or incest.
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How weird. This guy that looks just like an older version of me broke into my room and ranted something about how I needed to read this story or my life would be very boring. Guess I have no choice!
7846850 "Narcadisum"? Is that a word?
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I hear Canada is nice. Full of Canadians
7846887 acoording to my phones spell check it is.
7846555 the question is why my comment got so many dislikes
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If I'm not mistaken, "FIRST!" comments are still against the rules, and at least at one point were a bannable offense. On top of that the community generally hates them severely.
7847014 Neither Dictionary.com or Google are turning up anything, are you sure your phone's set to English?
haha nice Discolight hint there xD
7847053 I was kidding
Alright because people are kinda rude I will just say this. Good story.
7846650 That would be really close.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!! Absolutely brilliant! Great job, NBD. Love your work.
Ripping on Twilight, my favourite! nomnomThisIsTheSoundOfMeEatingPopcornnomnom
Be upvoted.
DaFuq?
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The common term is 'selfcest'. Okay as sex, though you definitely shouldn't try for children. (yep, rule63 selfcest counts)
I'm so dead right now.
slams wooden board on face
This is really funny. Probably the best I've read in a long time.
7846911 Nice? Yes. Chaotic? Maybe not so much.
I honestly expected the Pinkie Pie who showed up at the end to say something like:
Absolutely amazing, it's been quite some time since I read anything this entertaining on this site
absolutely loving the future Discord part
“I’m so sorry about this everyone. I can never understand a single word Blub Blub here says, so this has basically becomes our only clear form of communication.”
oh my god that's just pure gold
Very random and weird... I like it!
blub blub is best character.
This was fun, maybe you could write a followup story that's a bit longer
Corrections offered without malice.
stripping
addictive,
(first hit's free!)
Pilates
Well that was bizarre.
I loved it.