Displaced Fic
You know the deal, probably to the point that the descriptions themselves have become cliche, but here it goes. I went to a convention as Roxas from Kingdom hearts. After dealing with the merchant, I found myself in the land of Equestria from My Little Pony, around the time when Discord was first imprisoned. Being an avid fan, I decided to help Celestia and Luna imprison him. After that, we became friends. But after certain painful events, I found I couldn't face them anymore. So I left. And vowed never to return.
Chapters (33)
Dammit cliffhanger
As I don't have any back story and don't have access to his reason for that particular approach I can't really say how this fits into the story, but I think it would've been better if he had shown himself to the 8 ponies and then left again.
Ok recap of first episode plot but twisted with extra character dramatic revel suddenly. rainbow no bad. This Alright not bad but alright.
Hmmmm...... not much to go on. so I'll wait till more is shown to have any real comment or opinion on this story.
This intrigues me...
Continue.
How many nobodies are there going to be? More than one, surely, if the title is anything to go by.
Hmmm, a bit too little information in chapter 1...but at the same time, the summery gives us a bit of what to expect. That said, the cliff-hanger ain't too bad. I'll keep my council until chapter 2...still, not bad for a first chapter.
Eh, I'm putting this in my Read Later, looks interesting but I'm to lazy to read right now... Is the title a typo or are their going to be other Nobodies? Like say... Demyx?
6068859 Typo, just one nobody
6067684 I'm not sure what you mean by that, because the title doesn't use the plural form of Nobody. It's just singular possesive, meaning one noboby's regret.
6073850 Oh. Sorry. There should've been an apostrophe, and there wasn't. Thus, it wasn't possessive, it was plural.
http://www.scribendi.com/advice/how_to_use_plural_possessives_properly.en.html
Well done!
6073957 Thanks
6074629 You're welcome
It was only interesting at the end and in the summary. Honestly this chapter was 98% filler
from the season premiere but I'll be tracking for the chapters that actually contain your story 
next chapter please i want more
Hell yeah. Fire.
Now for the firaga spam. I can hear it now.
And yet again another piece of Human Loves Equestria bullshit.
I was not ready for this! A Displaced story starting in Season 1, its like you're trying something new!
6300423 Didn't know someones forcing you to read this, if that's the case you should get a restraining order.
Stay Classy
You should really change chapter 1 into something else than 90% filler. Everyone reading this knows how the first 2 episodes go.
I really like this story i hope you update more if you can if not it whatever
6316453 thanks a lot!
Great story so far, can't wait to read more
I love both mlp and kh and this story is great so far
HOLY MOLY! A KH Displaced with MLP?! YOSH!
Awesome story! I want MOAR!
FIRE! FIRE!! hehe... BUUURN!!! Got it memorized? git rekt M8! Roxas is extravegant!
OK who cares about the bast I WANT TO KNOW WHAT LUNA DID NEXT
sorry i am really anxious to know what Luna did after his apology
6409928 It will come eventually, but first I have a back story to develop so the present will make sense.
It's alive!
WHOA! Awesome chapter! LOVED THIS!
straight
As soon as I read the part where Roxas thought his parent might think him dead, I immediately thought that Roxas should get a heartless counterpart.
Great chapter and can't wait for more!
Good to see another chapter. Hope the next comes soon.
i hope another chapter comes soon ^_^
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6417653 Lol
6415855 its a Shadow ,you see that in Kingdom Hearts 1.
Can't wait for more chapters
Roxas: I'm unconscious!... Got it memorised?
i like how your not having your character give out there life story right off the bat ^_^
Great chapter! This was fantastic! I look forward to the next chapter. Am k the only one that thinks Roxas is adorable when confronting the Princesses? Lol.
“Hello Roxas. My name is Celestia, Princess of the Sun. This is my sister Luna, Princess of the Sun.”
Lol wut
6570624 Ok, i fixed it
The story is shaping up to be quite interesting. You've avoided a lot of the Displaced cliches so far (but not the "timberwolves are the first encounter" one), and I really appreciate that. It's definitely captured my attention.
Could use some proofreading, though. It skips between past and present tense a lot, and there are frequent (but not overwhelming) typos, such as:
and
Hey is Roxas going to crossover with other displaces and will he be able to dual wield?
6571035 Wouldn't that spoil things?