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Chaos Nightmare


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The end has come, The Mayan calendar was right and the end of the world has come, not in a mysterious planet X or a asteroid that could wipe us all out it came from earths inhabitants Man. Riots are happening in the streets of every major city and the governments can barely contain them.

But that isn't the focus of the story the focus is about me a survivor see the Mayan Calendar was a test by god believe it or not, the test was to see who would remain passive on this day and I passed. Now I get some powers and to go to a new world. Unfortunately I never chose the world and just asked to be sent to one at random.

Preread by Rikusorasephiroth
Edited and rewriten by Kye Belmont
Cover art by Caprisias

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 33 )

So ember has to summon her keyblade or has to mate with him to produce a child that will has his or her own keyblade neat

... I'm not even going to TRY and get into everything that's wrong with having a crew on a Gummi Ship, but I will say that they're meant to be used by only three to five individuals at MAXIMUM.

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They don't actually come to worlds with Huxley its more they keep the gummi ship running. plus this is a larger than normal gummi ship...i never say that int he chapter but the crew is meant to imply that

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Then I'd suggest you have them stop by Hollow Bastion and learn a bit more from Cid.

I swear, if this is the Teen Titans Go version...

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there exists a regular Teen titans you know...

NOt sure if I'm in mood for the story, even if I like the game, but since Time Turner is in ther, I hope Time Turner is just Time Turner, for some reason I don't like him to be Dr. Whoo in some stories. Maybe because I don'T like his powers/items there.

My real question is, who is the main char, did he copied an existing character or a different one.
2. I hope there aren'T to many crossovers interrupting the story flow or that the crossover characters that come to your world aren't some kind of OP assholes that know everything better, have 236 wifes and probably share them too, that and I hope those characters aren't just used to cheat trough difficult fights.

I had enough of those characters or displaced kind of getting raped or something similar with which the displaced was suddenly okay.
However more annoying are those displaced that get help from those with (often asshole personality) and have an easy time with everything.
What I try to say is, when they are crafty characters which makes it interessting, it is often dissapointing if they solve the problem for the main char without help.
That and I hope your main char isn't just absorbing powers like Dragonball attacks and is an kingdom hearts/Dragon ball/ (insert anime) multitalent.

a personal wish from me would be, if there is a romance that it makes kind of sense, is believable and not rushed and that he or she is the loyal type.
I know that maybe seems much right now, but I think it isn't really that much. After I mentioned the one thought I had I wanted to make sure I know right away what I'm getting to read here since I'm not in the mood for everything at the moment. I think it was the second or third generation if you want to see it like that, that I hated from the displaced a bit.

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Okay to answer your question

1. Time turner is just time turner. no hooves here.

2.this isn't a displaced story...its just in the folder because some person put it there

3. that being said there will be crossovers I'm hoping that they will be in a separate story

4.As I've said this isn't a displaced story so the main character is a strict OC.

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sounds good thank you.

‘Who says boos hurt’ they said.

You forgot to remove it.

Please have him run in to sora in a world

Could you tell me a bit about this Mayan Calender genre?

Blue blood is going to fuck up I just know it

how close is the next chapter if you had to give an approximation

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You and everyone else reading this.

“Yes for the next month and a half you three are to remain on Equestria while we find people to send to Hollow Bastion and gather the gems to trade to Disney.” Celestia explained.
How the hell is she going to stop Huxley, does she not know about the dark corridors?

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No, she doesn't know about his Dark corridors mostly because he's been trying to keep it a secret

Do I need to read other stories in order to under stand this one?

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What stories?

Edit: Oh I misread your question, Anyway not really but there is one story that is connected to this Here it is, Its not required but it gives context to the beginning

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I get that this is necessary to establish Gleaming isn’t just r63 Shining, but when are we going to see some new chapters? I know you have a reason for all the revised chapters but it feels like forever since the last time the story progressed.

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I did have a poll on whether or not people wanted new chapters while the revamp was going, they voted to finish the revamp first, so yeah no new chapters till the revamp is done

Comment posted by Raven dove deleted Aug 13th, 2019

Sad to see this story go, but you did tell us awhile ago that this would happen. Can't wait for the remake.

It's hilarious how many times he lost to the token hair model...XD

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