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Knight of Crows

Luck? I don't need it, I just need everyone else's to plummet while I'm around.


I found myself in Equestria with one gift, one that keeps giving in a way. I can make any deal I want for any price. The Deal itself grants it, we just need to agree. From reviving the parents of a foal for a few chocolate covered strawberries to granting a mad stallion eternal life in exchange for his wife and children (the family is fine BTW).

I can be the Devil looking for a soul to steal or an honest merchant who can make both our days. What do you want?

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Comments ( 33 )

This is a good start. I’ll keep a good eye out for updates.

Quite good. I'll be keeping an eye on this one for the foreseeable future. I'd like to see where you go with this concept. It kind of reminds me of BIll Cipher.

Nice chapter. A quick question, though, do you have anything actually planned for this story? Like, will there be an actual plot and conflict or will it just be a series of one-shot chapters that show what the protagonist has done in the past? Now, it should be noted, I don't mind either way as the chapters you've posted thus far are really good and interesting; my only concern is that you won't be able to keep it up given that you've given the protagonist the powers of a god and knowledge and experience on how to use them effectively.

I honestly don't know where I'm going with this. All I can say is there will only be 1 or 2 more one shot chapters before I focus on the present.

Edit: I wouldn't say powers of a god, more like he has a means of obtaining it and just doesn't care enough to acquire it, as stated in this chapter he still has to pay a price or give some kind of offering to revive the dead which still has limits anyway. The closest I've got planned for those kinds of powers are knowledge, weapons like soul eater, magic, and resistance to certain things like alcohol or poison.

I am liking the story but I am sad that you're not finished with the other stores.

You're sad I'm not finished with the others? That's a new one, I'll update them as ideas come to mind.

Something funny for you.

Looking forward to more updates!

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

No idea, once I start I just make shit up as I go, it should be done within a few days of me starting whenever that will be.

I’ve always liked these type of abilities, so please allow this story to grow so that I may read it! :pinkiehappy:

This is very interesting! I would like to see more of this.

Its alive!!!
Lol he's their baby daddy! Wonder how this is going to play out!
Thanks for the update!

IT LIVES:pinkiehappy: Also I am so looking forward to Twilight and Shining Armor's reactions when they find out their connection to Morningstar.

i hope you are not overworking yourself for our sake

Not really no. I at least try to keep my promises though, it took a week give or take a few days to write this chapter so I think the pace is reasonable.

Thank for the update glad its not dead thank u:pinkiehappy:

The interrogation turned into a friendly conversation after a little while. Celestis still asked about a few other deals I've made like when I fixed an old thestral queen's infertility problem in exchange for some favors that still haven't been cashed in, and that one time I helped an old Apple family ancestor through a famine. She invited Luna in after a while and not even the guard's made a move to stop her. I felt... Content if that's even the right word... I'm no longer a wanted man, I might finally have a home and somethimg to live for other than just living. She continued looking through until one name she skipped over caught her attention, to say she wasn't expecting Discord was an understatement. Long story short he wasn't always a draconequus, Discord isn't even his real name, he was once an orphaned child thanks to a corrupt guard back then and I gave him the power to drive that guard beyond the point of insanity. This was one of the few deals that could be violated and punished greatly, I specifically told him to drive him mad, not torture and kill him, if he had managed to control his bloodlust he wouldn't have become deformed and insane like he is now. Now I doubt he even remembers his previous life.

Are we going to get some drama with discord in the future

"Excuse gentlemen, do you have a moment to speak of the God of Tits and Wine?" I asked with a straight face holding the drinks from earlier (it's wine by the way). They lowered their weapons and started laughing before someone from the inside came out to see what was going on. Spotting me he immediately drew his weapon.

How do you say that with a straight face?:rainbowlaugh:

amazing story. love to read where you go with this.

I loved the GOT references in this! I still find it hilarious even after seeing the show:rainbowlaugh:

I look forward to the next chapter!

Update sometime this century please, thaaaanks

When can this story be updated

No idea, when I'm not too distracted by other things (which is very often), I'm focusing on the KH story.

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