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“An artist's job is to captivate you for as long as we've asked for your attention. If we stumble into truth, we got lucky, and I don't get to decide what truth is.” -Tabitha Fortis, The West Wing

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So there I was at my first convention. Awesome costume? Check. Few hundred bucks to waste on merch? Check. Keyblade to complete the costume? No check, couldn't get one cheep. Imagine my surprise when I find perfect replicas of both Oathkeeper and Oblivion. For two hundred bucks! The vendor is as creepy as all get out, but hey, a good deal's a good deal!

Next thing I know, well, you've heard this story before. Whisked off to Equestria, trapped in stone because of a misunderstanding, heartless trying to consume the world...

OK, that one's probably unique to me.

Edit: OH MY GOSH! Featured first day, 7/5/2015! Thank y'all so much!

Edit: currently undergoing massive revisions leading to its resurrection. Thank you for your patience. 3/8/2019

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This is very confusing. Why are some ponies genderbent but not others?

Anyway, hope Discord gets a bigger role in the story.

this seems pretty good :P

6170843 Every alternate universe needs something unique about it. :pinkiehappy:

And don't worry. Discord will be returning, and he and Sora will have A LOT to talk about. Well, talking with weapons. And magic. And some actual talking thrown in there.

6170853 Thanks! Please spread the word and let me know if there's anything that needs improving upon.

You know I have a Xemnas Displaced, they should team up sometime

6170987 :scootangel: I'm liking this idea! I do still need someone to introduce Sora to the whole displaced thing. What do you say?

6171007 Sounds good, he's partnered up with a Xion Displaced.

6171012 That's right, I just looked! You're the author of that Ben 10 displaced. Love your work there, man. I'd be honored to do a crossover with you!

It's going to be a chapter or two before Sora's ready to deal with other displaced, but I'll let you know when the time comes. Btw, what's Xemnas's token?

6171021 The Nobody emblem

Well... I like Kingdom Hearts. And I like MLP(obviously) but so far there is not much to differentiate this fic from countless other Displaced works. Anyway, I'll read on. As a Kingdom Hearts fan, I want to like this and I'll read further to see how it holds up.

P.S. Get a proofreader.

Well I like this already, and this will be interesting to have r63 characters involved.

6172862 Thanks for giving this a read!


6172626 Don't worry. The differences are coming!
Also, I had a number of people look over it. Did they and I miss something?

6173768 welcome to the kh displaced! Nice to see a new guy around that particular one. I'm guessing you chose Roxas here. Sweet I got a displaced that's sora. When your ready we should do a crossover at some point.

6191577 Actually, I'm also using Sora. I'll have to look into your story, make sure we aren't just writing the same type of thing. I'd love to crossover, though. That'd be interesting, having two Soras in the same place.

6191586 look for the story A Key In Equestria then that should help you out there.

6191589 Eeyup. Already in my "Read It Later" bookshelf.

Does anyone else imagine Solaris sounding like Thor?

6199147 ...huh. Kind of, yeah. A bit less pompous, but yeah. Huh. :derpyderp1:

I think that the Heartless have likely been in their world all along. But, come in mass after the Keybearer, as to explain the sudden circumstances found here.^_^ Interesting.

6301541 Well reasoned, and correct. That explanation will be coming in chapter 6. Thanks for the fave!

6301555 No prob.^^ And just send your skype when ready. About to go deal with the last of my big chores, and by the time you send that, well, might have time to talk.^^

Whisked off to Equestria? Been there. Turned to stone? Done that. Fighting heartless for the fate of the world? Bet that's a new one on you.

Not so much as you'd think, sadly. A Key in Equestria is in the 'Also Liked' menu for your story.

But the difference between your story and that guy's is simple - your story does not suck ass. (And is not, thankfully, a wish-fulfillment tale.)

EDIT (3/30/16): Yeesh. Past me had no chill whatsoever.

Six jaws dropped as Solaris and Luna laughed. "Seriously?" Blitz asked. "You just got blasted into a wall, and all you can think about is hitting on the Princess?"

He has a point. You would think he would be worried about 'talking horses' or about her abnormal large eyes, but nope, hitting it is! :rainbowlaugh:

Edit: I'm lucky. Seems like a new chapter just appeared! :raritystarry:

Interesting. :pinkiesmile: Guess I will have to wait for more.

You go, Alex! :rainbowdetermined2:

Who's Alex?*confused*

6453752 probably another displaced

6454733 lol I figured that much. But from what fic?

6454733 Correct. More details in the next chapter, which will be out before the end of the week.

?? If u defeat the heartless dasint Sore get money or item's from them even new summens??:derpyderp2:

6455210 Sora: ":yay:ing game mechanics."

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The end of the week? You are one fast writer, Author. Or/And good at organisation to make it that quick!

I'm already thrilled to see how it continues and I hope the circumstances of his imprisonment will be revealed soon! Oh, and I hope you will provide a link to the crossover story! :pinkiesmile:

Another excellent chapter.:D

Dang I'm definitely going to see about having my keyblade displaced meet yours if for no other reason then to help train the keyblade bearers. My token is a kh2 summon charm with the image being two crossed keys. Just read my 'a key in equestria' story to get the message it has.

Common misspell: 'loose' is as in a loose piece of clothing. 'lose' is as in 'win or lose'.

6470519 Thanks for catching that. "Lose" is one of those words that just doesn't look right to me. My brain sees it and says, "No, wait. That can't be how it's really spelled!" Gah, stupid brain. :pinkiesick:

I sincerely hope that the real Raven is somewhere in the hive in a coccoon to be rescued at some point. But really, nice plot twist, I've got to say.

6470547 I know the feeling. Doesn't help that 'loosing' is also a word, meant as a verb for making something 'loose'. Due to this, spellcheck thinks it's correct due to not checking for the context of the sentence.:\

6470566 Stupid English.

Oh, and no. Raven's doomed. So sad. :pinkiehappy::fluttercry:

6470662 Damn. She's one of my favorite backgrounds, so I was hoping that the real Raven is one of the coccooned ponies whom they're feeding on in the hive.

Both Luna and I burst out laughing. "And she lectured you against slander?" I asked. "Twilight, the point of slander is that it isn't true. I can guarantee that I know exactly what happened to your deserts during your punishment."

Just wondering, wasn't Solaris lecturing Twilight? :rainbowhuh:

Liked this chapter. Especially the 'ignore the wounded hero' part! :rainbowlaugh:

Sneaky number six....

"As such, I was planning to take a few months to meet with then ponies of Equestria.

Extra letter.

A much easier task now that we have the intensive to do something with the wall."

Think ya meant "Incentive."



...always thought Hayseed was evil.

Omg poor Sora xD

"A little help? I'm pretty sure I'm bleeding."

MY lungs hurt xD

6547561 One of my more genius moments, if I do say so myself.

At the start, you put 'loose' instead of 'lose'. Common mistake. Just thought I'd point it out. Now, on to the rest of the great chapter.^^

.... I am so eager for the inn scene. XD

Pease update soon so I can see inn scene :rainbowlaugh:
I have a feeling there's gonna be a decent bit of smack/hitting and then snu snu.
Heheh..... Snu snu...

Quite the way to end this chapter, eh?

I don't know why but the shape of the keyblades offend me.
They are not even "Blade" to begin with and their practicallity is zero.

aside from that, good story so far.

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