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Lon35hadow


A gamer for as long as I can remember, and always willing to help my friends; gamer or non gamer; Xbox, Playstation, or PC: if I can help, I will.

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So, this is unexpected.
Oh, sorry, guess I should introduce myself. At least, with my new identity. My name's Cinder Fall. If you haven't heard of me, I can't really blame you. Still, for those who have, I'm in Equestria, of all places. Not trying to conquer it, actually. In fact, I'm friends with the Princesses. Trust me, it was weird for me, as, before, I was just a normal wife where this-my new identity and this world-were fiction, and on my death bed when something spoke to me, and offered me a second life, as i had done some. . .well, let's just say immoral stuff in that life, shall we. Anyway, I guess I'd better start telling the story of what got me here, and what I've been doing. That's why you're here, after all. To read a story.
(My first RWBY story, but not my first Displaced. Also pre-displacment universe is the same as Shadow Kings and Harmony's Champion)

Chapters (14)
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Comments ( 102 )

Well congratulation to you on the story. you surely did beat me to the punch. Ahela a lot better than what I was going for.
I am looking forward to see where this goes.
From one fan of Cinder Fall to another
~Nightmareofthemoon

7347349 Of course, and thank you. I know I can't wait to see what she does in season 4. You know, if she's in it.

7347360 it looked like she got frozen in place by the end, but hey, who knows

7347395 Yeah, the renegades reaction channel brought this up, but wouldn't they have found her, then? Salem-I doubt- cares about what happens to her. Yes, the humans could find it odd she was up there but it's implied Qrow and the others-who I dub the Brotherhood of the seasons-know of her. Remember Qrow said he's seen what's out there, what she makes, plus the text he sent Ozpin on one. "Queen has pawns." He knew that worm thing was dangerous, and went after it. And even then, most would assume she was just someone using the chaos for her own goals not related to Beacon's fall.

7347400 I personally think she managed to GTFO at the last second, before Qrow showed up. So, did he take the elevator, or more than likely, fly up? I mean, how could he carry Ruby back down in his crow form, unless he decided to somehow get the elevator working again

7347423 Do you want me to point out he could have used his gun like Ruby used hers earlier in the volume, right? To get down, that is.

7347436 True, true. Though the image of Qrow bullet pogoing while carrying Ruby is an oddly humorous mental image. I also hope Pyhrra and maybe Summer come back as ghosts in some way because dang it all, Jaune and Ruby need good things in their lives

7347445 Pyhrra is confirmed dead, and most people think Salem is Summer.

Alright let's do this!

7347459
There's a difference between 'dead' and 'gone'. A more recent theory is that when she unlocked Jaune's aura (or when they finally kissed), she left a piece of herself in him (which makes the book Blake is reading in Volume 1 some epic foreshadowing) and will likely speak to him; much like how Joan of Arc claimed that she literally heard God speak to her.

7347543 Her voice actor confirmed it.

7347459 I said ghost, not alive, ghost, which does basically mean she's dead. Personally, I don't buy that theory. I mean, considering he plans endanger Ruby, Taiyang, maybe Raven, and Yang, as well as the world at large, I don't think she would do that.

7347545
She stated that Pyrrha is dead. Nothing more.
You forget that this is a fantasy environment, there's different levels of 'dead'. Especially when souls are a confirmed phenomena.

7347550 The Salem part of my reply? How would Summer know it was her kids she was fighting specifically, and still, it's obvious Salem knows a lot about humanity. Plus television deaths 101: If there's no body, there's a chance they're alive. For Pyhrra? Yeah, though I may be wrong, as I don't remember where I heard this, but I heard somewhere that her voice actor won't be in RWBY anymore. Wouldn't be surprised if I'm wrong, but still.

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7347558 Considering her VA is in Chibi, where Pyhrra didn't bite the arrow, I'm sure she'll be around, somewhere. I also think Jaune might be the one to kill Cinder, just due to how pissed he would be at her. He would become the Sly Marbo of RWBY.

7347568 Yeah, and Yang has her arm there, I know. I said RWBY, not Chibi.

7347574 True, still, she did say she was eager to play other characters, but alas, Pyhrra is legit dead. Granted, in fantasy, dead can mean a whole lot of things. I mean, maybe her soul is sharing a meatbag with someone else.

7347568
Unless he too is doomed by his name (Joan of Arc) and ends up being killed by Cardin Winchester (He picked up a black piece in Volume 1 and the Cardinal of Winchester sentenced Joan of Arc to be burned at the stake for witchcraft).

7347595 I heard somewhere that no other protagonist deaths until season 10, if it gets there. Now ,
7347595 7347594 Can we let this go and wait until more of the show comes out to see who was right?

7347595 That would be interesting. I actually read a fic where both die (Jaune possibly for standing guard, causing Cinder to kill him), and ending up during the 100 Years War. Oh, and Cinder becomes the "Witch-Queen of England" and Ruby has been fighting for the Scottish.

7347628 I see ruby being more native/American. Her sprit like powers like that the sawmens ask to use and her being the underdog and mostly coming out on top like the USA in most wars.

7348682 I think you meant Shaman, not sawmen. And well, she ended up with the Scottish, with Jaune and Pyhrra ending up at France. (Thankfully, the court believing their auras and Semblances are a God-given gift save them from being executed as witches)

Hmm, this is interesting... :duck:

7348707 I can't spell very well and my phone was too far away for me to use it's "ok Google" that and I'm lazy of fuck XD. I was also just calling what I see.

I like the story so far keep up the good work

Will this have spoilers for after season 1 because I just finished red vs blue and am only half way through the first season

7355405 At the moment, no, but later on, yeah.

Can't wait to read more! Keep it up!:pinkiehappy:

KO awesome chapter, seems the whole Cinder gang is here in Equestria and something tells me that this is only the beginning of the fun. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

Oh, now who are those people at the end? Seriously, IDK:applejackunsure:

7371417 You're forgetting someone. Ice cream, perhaps? Hint hint as to who's missing.

7374029 KO oh yeah her I remember. Hope the story goes great and hope you check my own RWBY crossover story. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

I can has crossover?

7376451 Later, after more of the gang gets there. Team CRME-pronounced crime and brought on by the volume 3 blu-ray spine- aren't the only ones coming to Equestria.

KO awesome chapter, Cinder has arrive and will meet the others face to face. Hope there'll be some fighting. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

Ah yes...glad I'm not the only one using secret agent drops

Oh, this is getting good. Can't wait for the next chapter!:pinkiehappy:

KO looks like things will be interesting for when Cinder meets the others. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

It's time for a little sting operation.

Flame control is not Cinder Fall's Semblance, in fact, it is currently unknown what her semblance is. She use fire and the glass manipulation through dust, said dust is sown into her clothes, witch is why they glow when she uses her powers, for more information on this stuff click here, I'm surprised you didn't read something like this before writing this.

Well I'm Glad They Worked it out when apprehending The rest of Cinder's Group, What will happen when they reached either "Ponyville" or "Canterlot"?

:applejackunsure: Random Question...When you open Crossovers with other stories, which ones are you gonna do a crossover with? are you gonna do a RWBY crossover with either "Blazikenking: I Burn" or "Frost the Wolf: Monkey Business"? I Can only imagine the reaction to both when they meet Cinder...

7437879 At this point, the only story I have in mind for a crossover is my other one, The Shadow Kings, as well as Harmony's champion.

7437938 KO awesome chapter, everything work out for everyone but the moment got interrupted by Discord. I hope Neo and team JNPR comes next also who'll pair up with whom?? :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2:

When they said Chaos my first thought was "great, warhammer here. Everyone fucked."

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