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I knew Mist was crazy.
I guess when she was made they screwed up with her programming, because earlier in the story Flo claimed elementals couldn't go insane.
I figured something was up with Mist, but hoo boy. That's a helluva something.
8040780 That's not insanity, that's just typical female behavior. You might call it a bit crazy, though.
Delicious. This meal was lovely, thank you.
Somehow, I get the feeling that we, the reader, are Smiles and you, the author, are Nav.
Hah good 'ol Smiles! :)
8040811 consider, the earlier you started reading this story... the less content you have to go through, also other people use their free time differently than you do, so they could just be pouring it all into reading this story over and over again.
8040811 Dude this is my 6th-ish time reading this story, and I can safely say that if you dedicate an entire week to it, stopping only to eat, sleep, and poop, you can do it.
Poor Smiles
The gods are walking the Earth once more son. All you can do is mourn your losses and keep your head down.
He who god would destroy, he hands a grenade with a lit fuze.
Eh mine did but we're chill now.
Just think, a second air ship will be needed if the party continues to grow.
Eh, shouldn't be too hard for Nav to find some common ground with Blaze. After all, both have the same problem: a
crazypsychotic woman that believes she's in love. Though I don't think Blaze has been raped... hopefully he hasn't.It kinda rubbed me the wrong way how flo forgave nav for killing that kobloid so quickly. I know that might be the wrong assumption and she'll bring it up later, but that's how I read it.
Also crazy theory: Luna hasn't bothered nav in a while because she's using the spell Twilight used to clone navigation, and she has her own harem of navs to keep her company..... and torture.
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Now I want to see Nav and Blaze beat up Luna, Rick Sanchez and Summer Smith style
youtube.com/watch?v=WKOJAD46XVU
8041377 A second one is going to be needed, or the current one very much expanded. Cause there are more Fire Elementals, which is a fire hazard waiting to happen, and Earth Elementals which probably weigh too much for normal airships as it would be like carrying an entire mountain worth of weight, for each Earth Elemental.
Dedb1rd
8041579 YES
8041583 Enter admiral Navarone! Commander of a ragtag fleet! Woo! Battlestar Emelpia!
I'm sorry, but I think Rarity is a bit full of it there. She's probably one of the quicker tempers among the mane 6 that if someone killed one of her friends right in front of her she'd probably be trying to stab them with her horn a second later. Heck, as Nav recaps here, she once attacked him/her for calling her ugly. 'I like to believe I could get over my base instinct and reason with them,' my ass.
8041583 There's only one earth elemental, and he's probably too heavy to be carried by anything other than an aircraft carrier. They'll probably just get a proxy.
8040929 except that this whole story feels extreamly well thought out, and we are still hitting stuff that was mentioned in the first chapter
So when Nav found Flo (the first water elemental he found), there was a sword with an ice enchantment that turned out to be Excalibur. When he found Aerie (the first air elemental he found), there was a magic spear with a lightning enchantment (can't remember if it was Gungnir, The Spear Of Destiny, or neither ), and when he found Blaze (the first fire elemental) there was an axe with a fire enchantment on it. Will the earth elemental have a hammer or something? Just a nice little spacing I noticed
... Blaze could use Spike as a chair.
Well... The names Mist and Misery do share the first three letters.
I knew Gilda would get saved by the fire! Called it.
8041750 I think its more likely to be enchanted gauntlets, given that Earths supposedly didn't use weapons
Wow, this is pretty deep.
The gay guy trying out to be straight with females for all he knows he might as well gonna die in the near future? That is pretty deep...
I am so glad this story is still going strong. This is one of my most favorite stories and whenever an update happens I stop what im doing and read the shit out of it. Keep doing what you're doing man
Why don't they just make the ship fire-proof? Or fire proof some cloth for him to wear in a way that contains the fire?
Make him look like a Saudi.
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Unbelievable! Inconceivable! Absolutely in agreement!
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Dedication!
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Little bit of A, little bit of B. I plan out major points but the road to them is mostly ad-libbed.
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Do attempted abortions count?
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Flo said they were going to have a talk.
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Violence against Nav doesn't count, because he always deserves it.
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That's kinda hot.
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More like he's pretty deep, if you know what I mean.
I wonder if the Minotaur could make a golem to hold the fire elemental and serve as a vessel. that way his flames would stay contained in flammable areas but he would still be free to move around. More so than if he was fully exposed, he would be able to go into the ship and other buildings safely.
Am I the only one who thinks of this story as the One Piece of fan fiction?
Stupidly long and probably still not even half way finished.
8040811 dude I read this story in about 2 1/2 weeks reading every word its probably my fifth time reading this well fully from start to finish anyway some time I just read parts of the story like the Egypt part and then put it down I really liked the naga parts in the beginning actually
8042518 pssh autor, you no Nav!
That is Navi'sh talk!
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There are a tremendous amount of
misinformedspeedreader commenters, so certainly not. whatmustido posted a comment a while back, though I couldn't find it now, that the story was 2/5 done. I'm fairly certain we're close to 3/4 now.Furthermore, there are far, far, far longer stories than this both on fimfiction and fanfiction.net. They're just not dumped into one page so zero-effort "sort by length" won't find you them. It also doesn't necessarily mean they're a good read.
8040569 Orly?
lol the entire harry potter series only adds up to 1 mil words. Also, does anyone else picture nav as warrior princess xena?
Throwing Smiles a bone, or lack thereof, I like it.
Congratulations whatimustdo on having written the longest work in human history. From what I looked up, the longest was 2.1 million words and you made just over that at the time of writing this. Been looking forward to saying that for a while. Now I have something good to read on my flight. :D
8043184 you're thinking of longest published novel. There are longer FanFiction's then this out there, including a mlp one that is, last I checked, over 8 million words long. But yes, this is insanely long
8043239 I can't seem to find it, but I'm almost positive it was on here
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Alright then, I suppose I stand corrected.
*sobs quietly in the corner over the death of my poor, poor joke*
Add on note so I'm not misunderstood:
Despite the word "stupidly" in my previous comment, I love this story to bits, but this comment shouldn't turn into a rant, so I'll leave it at that.
We finally got a Fire! For some reason, I keep imagining Tirek when I think of Blaze.
Next time we head back to Canterlot, and maybe a hot lesbian sex scene with Kat and Navarone. Or maybe add Twilight and make it a three-way. Giggity.
~KBO.
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Look up The Chase, here on fimfiction. It's like, stupidly long.
8043567 I'm sure there will be pussy galore.
So with twilight dabbling in necromancy, I feel this quote from her in another fanfiction is pretty fitting.
"Nopony ever learned anything by staring at the cover of a possibly dark magic warded tome, did they?"
Do you think mist worries about the burning sensation she'll be feeling after sex?
Protect your fucking healers.
8044922 this is to real for me.