• Member Since 17th Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen 2 hours ago

Jade Ring


"There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you." -Maya Angelou

E
Source

On the surface, it's an ordinary meeting between friends. Fluttershy and the former Princess Celestia are friends, aren't they? How could they not be?

And because they're friends, Fluttershy has something very important to discuss with the former leader of Equestria. Very important and very personal. It involves fears, doubts, and the romantic life of the creature who was once Equestria's greatest threat...

/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

An little idea that popped into my head and simply would not go away until I put it down on paper.

Special thanks to Rubycast and Swirling Line for pre-reading.

Chapters (1)
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!
Comments ( 19 )

Dang gum, that song started skipping through my mind before I even read the description.

Ya know, I had an idea for such a story with Twilight and Sunset Shimmer arguing over Flash Sentry. "Flaming locks of Auburn hair" it was too good of a fit. Too good. Almost tropey as a matter of fact. I never wrote it for that exact reason.

You did it WAY better. Well done.

“He… he called your name.”

Wait... I thought this was rated E....

“In his sleep.” Fluttershy pushed her face forward and looked straight into Celestia’s eyes. “He called your name in his sleep.”

Oh, thank God!

Wow, fantastic story! This is a really interesting way to relationshiop of the characters.

What a sweet story this was. I loved it

I never thought I would see a Celestia-Cord (of sorts) that I would like.

Yes, I know the focus was on Fluttershy, and you did it very well.

Lovely work on both ends. I do love an "X confronts Y" story where both characters handle themselves well and the argument ends amiably. The specifics were fantastically executed as well, especially Celestia's wisdom. Thank you for this.

Seconding FOME, this was quite lovely all around!

10145260

I had the same idea... but Fluttershy simple asked to talk with Celestia and not crush her bones and drink wine from her skull, so It should be a SFW situation.

For those too shiftless to look it up

My mother was a huge CW fan :trollestia:

Never heard the song, but this story is definitely music to my ears.

Huh.
I heard it the moment I saw it.

10146078
The synthpop cover by Strawberry Switchblade is pretty good too. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6oxzoDWY1PM

10148081
Yes, it is. That is *I* like it

If my mother wasn't already dead, she would have
shit a brick -sideways (favored obscene expression)
& this would have likely killed her

Comment posted by John Blackbeard deleted Last Thursday

Great story! 😚🙏

Whoa.

This was powerful. I enjoyed it a lot. I really like how Celestia wasn't just "Celestia" about it, but it genuinely seemed like she was confused by Fluttershy's accusations.

Celestia chuckled and took another gulp. “My postage obsessed little sister has declared herself the unofficial mail mare of Silver Shoals. She even somehow managed to get her hooves on a uniform. She takes great pleasure in collecting everypony’s mail as soon as it arrives at the front desk and gets it to everypony it’s supposed to get to.” She shrugged. “I don’t get it, but it’s her hobby and she enjoys it.”

Celestia likes single action adventure
Luna more social activities...

Celestia had paperwork
Luna had isolation

Makes sense they try to balance this out.

Celestia allowed herself a small smile. “I’m also an excellent chess player.”

But not as good as Fluttershy.
I read the story. You got obliterated!

Login or register to comment
Join our Patreon to remove these adverts!