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Jade Ring

The purpose of a story is that it's a story. It can be more, but it can never be less.



This story is a sequel to Dear Sweetie Belle

Everypony has to grow up sometime. Now a teenager, Sweetie Belle ventures to the Fillydelphia Academy of Music in order to start the search for her biological father. Will she find the stallion she's searching for, or is she doomed to disappointment?

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I beseech thee for another sequel

Very sweet! The warm fluffy part of my heart was pleased to find out that Crescendo wasn't such a bad stallion after all.

Now if only we could get 'Dear Scootaloo' into the queue.....

not bad. it's great X3

2065826 Just be thankful I got this out when I did. College is doing it's very best to kill me. I swear on the souls of my ancestors, one day you shall read 'Dear Scootaloo.'

2065777 Somewhere in the recesses of my mind, there's an alternate version of this where Crescendo was not a very nice pony. I like this version a lot better.

2065654 I don't know about a sequel, but rest assured; you haven't seen the last of Crescendo and he'll most likely be bringing Dimmy along.

Of course I will, why do you think I'm watching you? 'Dear Sweetie Belle' caught my eye well before coming here to FiMfiction, and I want to see the rest of its universe played out.

This continuity still has many tales to tell.

Also, 'Dear Scootaloo' had better be written at some point this year... or I'll invent some way to unleash Pinkie Pie upon you!

..... SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE :rainbowkiss: I loved this, absolutely and completely loved this!

*Slowly claps
This is an amazing story and an amazing sequel to Dear Sweetie Belle. I've had as many feels reading this is story as I did when reading Dear Sweetie Belle.You're a very talented writer and I hope you continue to write these amazing stories. :pinkiehappy:

I'm still reading. Didn't read any comment.

"“So… why’s your mane gray?”"
It's him.

"it was actually a vibrant pink.”"
I knew it was him.

When I finish I'll post if I'm if I got happy or was wrong.

Tartarus yeah!!! It never fails me.

but sunddenly:

"“I have no reason to distrust either of you.”"
Oh no...

"leaving the unicorns alone to catch up."
nononoonono please no, please fail this time

it failed me so far but then comes:

"He’s going to be thrilled to find out he has a big sister.”"
I really don't think you'd do this but then I don't really think that that flashback counts as the sex scene. I guess I'll just have to wait and see. (and please let me be wrong).

Aaaand thanks to celestia I'm wrong.

And thank you for another great story. Now, will we have anything with Dimmy?

2086106 Oh how I do enjoy leading my readers on...

Yeah, the sex tag is for the flash-back. I just threw it on there for safety.

It's not gonna happen for a long while, but I would love to tell a story about Sweetie Belle getting to know her little brother. Crescendo and Dimmy will probably appear in some other works as well.

Sooooooooooooooooooo, I hate to be... "that guy" but any sort of "Dear Scootaloo coming out soon?

P.S. Awesome story :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

2100635 You guys won't leave me alone about that bloody story... I can't deal with all this PRESSURE! :pinkiecrazy:

At the risk of getting your hopes up again, here's my tentative list of things to write in the order I plan on writing them.
-Suddenly, Spikey :raritywink::moustache:
-Can You Read My Mind? :ajsmug::rainbowkiss:
-Phases of the Moon (Lost in the Night sequel)
-DEAR SCOOTALOO :scootangel:

Now, that's not factoring in the next chapters of Time Defense Guild.

Are you going to put this fic on your Fanfiction site?

2133725 You mean fanfiction.net? Or the Pony Fiction Archive?

I'll get them both up there eventually.

Wow, my feels are riled again. Such a touching sequel here, beautifully written and informative. Not going to lie your dedications at the start got to me a bit as well what with me being an adopted child and all. Sometimes I wonder.........
Thank you for this.

Stop stirring up the feels!

... Poor guy... Still, Yayifications for Sweetie Belle! 8D

You got a new follower :raritywink: I thought the follow button was broke for me for a long while

mihi licet ambulare ad latrinum

Ahhh, I remember my own days in Latin class... It was awful. :rainbowwild:

2263747 Yes. Yes it was.

Dam you and the good writing that gives me all the feels!!!!!! Amazing story.

Haha guess I was late welp I know what im reading now ;)

2263829 Man me too, that and the Pledge of Allegiance.

I think this story was a worthy successor to Dear Sweetie Belle (though I must admit I did like that one more), still this one had emotion in it, and while Sweetie found Crescendo rather quickly, I think it's forgivable, because sometimes these things just happen so easily, things change in the blink of an eye. Also glad to see him and Rarity actually sorta patch things up (too bad they couldn't rekindle their relationship). Looking forward to whatever is next for Sweetie Belle and her new family.

2284023 I found the idea too perfect and hilarious to resist. Sweetie Belle is all set for this epic quest that she's spent years preparing for, a journey she knows will take her to the very borders of Equestria...

lolnope, he's her teacher.

There may still be something there between Rarity and Crescendo. At the moment, there just happens to be something else between them. :moustache:

Damnit, I spilled my liquid pride everywhere....

I love the detail that goes into these things. Like the noodle incident of Rarity and her roommate got a hint--the bunk bed?--and that's awesome.
Oh, and it was a sweet story, too. Can't forget that.

D'awwww. That was pretty adorable. Nicely done.

I just finished..... IT WAS AMAZING!:rainbowkiss: I just wish there was more.:raritycry:

Awwwww.......... :heart:

Amazingly sweet story. diabetus-inducing levels of sweetness, even. so glad to see everything work out for the best. also, way to go, Spike! all that persistance finally paid off!

A good old fashioned happy sitcomy ending but it was still good I expected a little more drama but I would go a far to say I was disappointed.

Great job and
semper ubi sub ubi

Okay, now I want to see Dimmy and Sweetie Belle meet. How the heck did I not notice that part of the story last time? I've read this three times now...

2733180 'Sweetie and Dimmy' is now in production.


Oh duh, you said that in your last blog. I've got to stop forgetting stuff like this...

I haven't even read this yet but I read the last so this is going to my favorites...
Also I demand more of this...
Um... If that's all right with you...

All of my feels are belong to you. This story was amazing, it was very good for a sequel, and unlike the original, the ending did not let me down. Seriously, am I the only one who thought that ruined it? It takes away from the story, lessens the impact it had on us, and it's there for absolutely no reason. Don't get me wrong though; both stories are incredible and I favourited both immediately. I'm just saiyan...

3325181 You might not feel that way about the ending if you read 'Dear Applebloom.' and 'Dear Scootaloo.'

Amazing story! Sweetie belle's stories were amazing. Truly say I liked the story

Very fun and cute story. Nothing else to say is good job.

Damn you!! Now theres some kind of wet substance leaking from my sight holes.....why must you write such sweetness!!??

4231968 There's another... *squee*

Why is this in badass twilight?

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