Lovely, special, and sweet. Thank you for a lovely chapter.

Huzzah!

I wouldn't mind it have been a few days more. Cliffhangers are good just don't wait months on one.

Hnnng, my feels!

Very nicely done, and I remember seeing my first shooting star back when I was younger...

Another chapter well done!

That was absolutely adorable.

This chapter was a HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG

This was soooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuute

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Sentiments shared here, sentiments shared.

.... So thinking back on it, I feel like if I didn't think my marefriend was a deity of some power, thiiiiiiis would probably be the thing that changes that opinion. She sang the stars from the skies so they would dance like fireflies for goodness sakes.

I actually really miss the Chessgame of the Gods fimfics. Im glad to see some are still being made.

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It's more of a blending of Displaced and CGotG.

O m g I loved the cuteness romantics

Well it was a complete surprise, though brief, that when i went to press the next chapter button only to find it missing. A compelling story. Thank you for it thus far. It's not rushed at all and there is no distraction from outside tokens which have often had guest characters outshine the primary protagonist. This i can appreciate even more.

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Eh, but those happen once in a blue moon.

Happy Valentine's day folks, pons, and ponyfolk!

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ya i figured that out thanks

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Well it was a complete surprise, though brief, that when i went to press the next chapter button only to find it missing. A compelling story.

Which part? The story of The Aetherium Mage, or the journey you had to discovering the missing next chapter button?

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Yes.

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Huh? How the heck did you get that? Mrs. Doubtfire was well after the time of this movie.

This chapter made me smile. A great way to start a day.

9455922 may I make a suggestion? When you have Ash enchant something please let him have the ability to create the bloodskal blade effect. I suggest this cause there's a mod called Imbue that allows you to disenchant the bloodskal blade and use the effect on other weapons or just choose to have the enchantment as a shrine blessing. it's permanent unlike the other shrines allowing you to enchant weapons with the ability to fire off beams of energy similar to the bloodskal blade. also if you really want to push His powers look up a game called Magicka. It would make sense that he somehow gets the abilities of that gameas one of his other blessings because the system in Magicka allows you to combine elements on the Fly. Allowing Ash to create brand new spells even easier than just using imagination to create them through new effects that he can think up.

Well. Took me a few days but I'm all caught up, unfortunately.

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Sort of like the system they intended for Skyrim but dropped for some reason. You were supposed to be able to mix effect to create hybrids. I'll never understand why they so thoroughly gutted magic as they did.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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Ah, thanks.

Only one word successfully describes this chapter.

D'AAAAAAWWWWW!~

I'm hoping Celestia is the one that finds them in the morning and takes a picture for blackmail purposes.

Didn't expect things to end here but it was a nice way to end the story for the moment

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

When the next chapter would be coming? If at all?

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Dear author please update this great story. I really wanna read it some more.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

dear author please update this great story

More!!!!!! I NEED MY FIX

I have been reading this off and on for the past week and I finally think I'm really getting into it I catch up...... for now I need it...I NEED IT this story is so good

I really like what you did with this, other stories have done the whole Luna star show for a date thing but turn really stands out. I hope to read more from you soon,best of luck . Everafter

Oh my fucking lord, that’s adorable!
I need more!

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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panic at the disco this is gospel the song

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What song my guy

This is amazing so far! Some chapters could use an editor for sure but other then that it’s very enjoyable and this chapter here was a very new, interesting, and amazing date between Luna and the main character that I have not seen before at all it was fucking enjoyable to all hell and can’t wait to see more!

It's been over a year and this hasn't updated. Does anyone know what happened or if it's become a dead story? I hope not I've really enjoyed it seeing as how this is my third or fourth time reading this.

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Hey there! I'm really glad you liked the story, and I'm happy to say its not dead! I've been dealing with a lot of things, not all of it bad, including a lot of my accounts being hacked. You can read a blog I made here to find out more!

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Ha ha buddy.

🤔 can’t wait for the next chapter

Update any time soon?

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What he said

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I personally think it’s the runes, not the candles or foci center, but this is open to interpretation, so meh.

Update anytime soon?