Ash, a recently deceased man, wakes up in a strange realm with a strange figure claiming to be 'God' nearby. He soon finds himself offered a chance at a new life under one condition; join the game and play by the rules.
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I love the detail and thought you put into your chapters. Each one brings something new and interesting to light and it's always interesting to read.
I can't decide if I think Luna is going to adhere to the traditions almost religiously, go against them purposefully just to prove she can be fun, or get one good kiss and say "the hell with waiting" and jump Ash in the hall... All are plausible, and any could be quite fun. Equally intrigued to see whether or not Ash winds up adding a second to their little relationship, but I'm biased with a serious affinity towards Luna/Celestia/MC stories.
Solid world building, as always, and I can't wait to see what you do with it!
This is already one of the best-displaced fics I've read and for one reason the world building is excellent.
She wants Discord to fight a void dweller? Yeah suuuure, its like going with a knife to a gun fight
Is there possibility that their relationship wont work out just like in Cadance thoughts?
"Even if Ash and Luna ended up separating, Luna would be more willing to give another stallion a chance and Ash would gain much-needed experience in Equestrian dating."
If they will broke up there is still Celestia and maybe Chrysalis or they can join the herd.
I really, REALLY hope that you are not doing all this build up for nothing! It would be a Real Kick to the Balls, it would.
Discord vs Void Dweller, yeah I am sorry but that's like having fucking Link trying to stop Majora's moon with a stick! It just doesn't work!
On a Side note, how close is this going to stick to Canon as far as major Event's go?
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Well, as I've said, I'm not sticking particularly close to canon. Some canon events WILL happen, but not all.
It is always sad to find a good story that has caught your interest, with a decent length, and catch up to it all in one sitting.
Sometimes I hate my enthusiasm and reading speed.
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Same.