Ash, a recently deceased man, wakes up in a strange realm with a strange figure claiming to be 'God' nearby. He soon finds himself offered a chance at a new life under one condition; join the game and play by the rules.
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I would suggest putting the pictures in the authors notes, if only to not break up the flow of the story
...I do wonder who hasn't played Skyrim yet, with all the re-releases it's been through
You planning on taking Luna dungeon delving? I suggest a Dwemer Ruin, maybe even one that leads to Blackreach
Hmm...I wonder if that gem felt wrong due to being charged with something....OTHER than a soul....
I see what you did there
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Hmm. That's not a bad idea, but, on the opposite side, a picture in the story itself gives them immediate knowledge of what I'm describing. And I, personally, don't know anybody who has not played Skyrim at least once, but I'm sure those mermaids do exist.
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I see your point and understand where the idea came from, but no, Luna is not being taken dungeon diving. The chapter is already written and will be up tomorrow, so I'm not going to spoil it further.
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Perhaps it's charged with magic that made it different, or perhaps the soul was placed inside by a different means, or perhaps it's not even a soul gem! Who knows? I don't! (Just kidding, I do.)
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I totally didn't take a guard quote from Skyrim, change it up a bit, and then make Celestia say it.
Okay with THAT type of interaction between Luna and Ash I will be sad if they don't atleast become a Couple!
I have a Theory on why the Soul Gem feels off, But I will wait to see if you give any more info on it.
I really like the subtle way the princesses placed an unknown creature with an unknown magic in Canterlot to keep a close eye on plus as a possible valuable asset
I love friendship. I love the Diarchy.
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SHHHHH! You notice nothing!
> Should I continue to do so, or cease?
It's ok. Just try not to go overboard. Up to 3 per chapter should be enough.