Ash, a recently deceased man, wakes up in a strange realm with a strange figure claiming to be 'God' nearby. He soon finds himself offered a chance at a new life under one condition; join the game and play by the rules.
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Wow you updated as i was reading the last chapter
So I haven't read this chapter yet but I'm curious. Are you planning on trying to make this an every day update like bugging me?
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It was, at first, simply because I had the time to do so. My schedule is becoming busier so I am just beginning to post every other day. This is the first chapter following that new schedule.
This is absolutely lovely all the way through. I have absolutely no criticism to offer, and thank you for not having them fall in love in 4 days. Interest yes, clear connection yes, but love takes more than a few days to grow and I'm glad you're giving it that.
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Thank you for the honest opinion! I've got big plans for the future of this story, and not all of the Romance-based, and I'm looking forward to it! While I would prefer to have a daily update schedule, my personal schedule is getting busier so I've been forced to update every other day instead, so there will be plenty of chapters on the future, even if not as many as I would like.
Just remembered the master level healing spell that's pretty much an explosion. Getting THAT certified will be funny.
Is Ash going to achieve Chim (Godhood)? It'd completely nullify their mutual fears for a relationship. Also potentially jumpstarting some sort of drama, like Equestria's growing power. Having not one, not two, not even three, but FOUR God Entities within its borders.
Obtaining Agelessness or even full-blown immortality in the EOS Universe is stupid easy sometimes, maybe it'd be possible.
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"Alright so I learned this new spell, it's called Grand Healing and is this big blinding blast of-"
"Blast? Like a fiery explosion?"
"Well kind of but it's-"
"Nope, absolutely not happening. I draw the line at explosions. That Necromancy you tried-"
"It was reanimation, no souls were even involved!"
This stuff practicly writes itself.