Ash, a recently deceased man, wakes up in a strange realm with a strange figure claiming to be 'God' nearby. He soon finds himself offered a chance at a new life under one condition; join the game and play by the rules.
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Welcome back, and a solid chapter to come back with. As ever, the characters still feel real, the varied customs are interesting, and I like that nobody is under and disillusions that the date is going to go flawlessly. Two very different cultures are coming together, it'd be odd if there wasn't a hiccup or two. Really liking forward to the date itself!
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You're making the assumption that "steak" automatically means cow. This could easily be Hydra, Manticore, or any other aggressive but potentially tasty beast.
So ponies in this version of Equestria are quite... sensitive.
I can see how that cultural normalcy would be a problem for some of our races “thick skin” attitude, as Ash had mentioned about his friends in this chapter.
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DING DING DING!! You got it!
I'm liking the story pretty greatly so far. A suggestion I have for the story, especially the healing aspect, would be the medical concept of triaging patients. Even if there's no real time constraint or dire consequences, have Ash consider which pony to heal first.
For instance, I would have tried to heal the cut first because that one has the potential to get infected, even though the healing would probably cure the infection.