Ash, a recently deceased man, wakes up in a strange realm with a strange figure claiming to be 'God' nearby. He soon finds himself offered a chance at a new life under one condition; join the game and play by the rules.
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I hope your friend feels better and I understand that you had to push the posting of the chapter later!
Lovely, as usual. I'm enjoying the character development, and the character interactions are spot on as always. The spells and such continue to fascinate, and the story is just plain fun to read. Great work.
It would be rather funny if Ash tracks Luna down and she's in the bathroom (specifically the shower) in her quarters as what some might think of as a small naughty prank. Although I could see Trollestia potentially setting up various pranks to see how focused Ash could be whilst he seeks Luna. I'll be honest, I wouldn't really have the patience to deal with nobility as Celestia does (as I'd just turn them into fluffy footballs and start practicing my punting) and I'm sure she has plenty of practice dealing with stupidity.
I know it'd be a childish prank, but if he were focused on tracking Luna and somepony layered whoopee cushions over a floor in a room, would he notice (though the challenge, I'd think, would be not setting them off yourself if you were an Earth Pony and giving away the prank)?
Yus! More Ash x Luna Fluff! I am still scared this is just a Lead on BUT I will keep reading none the less!
I have to ask though, do the Nobles know he exists yet? If so can we see what they think of him in the future?
glad you branched out in the schools. It would have been annoying if he concentrated only on restoration for any longer.
Also are birthsign powers a thing in your story.
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Well, it was stated that he is focusing on the Restoration school because he seeks to be a healer. It was expected. Even then, he knows spells from all the schools except Conjuration.
As for the sign powers, it hasn't been revealed.
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While his existence is no secret anymore, he hasn't been publicly announced yet either. Remember that he has been to both Ponyville and Canterlot city. No nobles have spoken with him yet, though, and I have plans for it.
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Out of Curiosity how do you plan on working the Nobles? I see a lot of people make them out as Greedy, Nose-in-the-air Cunts and others make them out to be Snobby but otherwise decent ponies.
I am asking as I can't really see Celestia or Luna allowing them to be like most Portray them.
I have likely asked this before, but when does this take place? I seem to be blind and can't find any references to timeline
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Well, the nobility of Canterlot is actually going to be rather diverse in their ideals and mannerisms. While they won't be as bad as some other stories make them out to be, some of them WILL be bad. Other than that, you'll have to wait and see.
As I've said, this takes place before the Canterlot Wedding episodes, so before the end of season 2. However, this story is Non-Canon and won't follow all events of the show.
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Ah, okay I think that's a good idea! I see a lot of stories Go one Extreme or the other (much like the ponies themselves heh) so it's gonna be interesting to see how a middle road will go.
Oh right, Gonna be interesting seeing how some of the upcoming Events (if you choose to do some of them) will play out, I really can't wait to see what you do with A Canterlot Wedding (again assuming you do it) It's another one of those event's that go one Extreme or other Other
So what all are you adding in from Skyrim? I imagine signs will have a small part but what about thu'um? And also would he be able to do the enchanting potion thing to make op poitions,enchantments and armor? By the logic of magic it should technicaly work unless you add a law of magic conversion or something. Like it is possible but each power up requires more magic.
Welp, fuck it Equestria deserves to be nuked, fucking imperials, only one retarded nation still uses this outdated system.
You may as well use stones to measure weight you uncivilized swine.
JK but seriously fuck the imperial system.
Have there been any hints about his other two powers he was gifted? I just read through and this is a great story.
I'm new to the story but I liked it enough good job keep it up
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Well, quite a few things from Skyrim will be coming into play in the future (obviously), but I'm not going to reveal much. I will admit that I've toyed around with the idea of the Thu'um, but Ash isn't the Dragonborn, so it would take years for him to learn just Fus, so I'm not sure if it's worth adding in.
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Clairvoyance really is a useless spell in a world full of quest markers. In a world without them, I suspect the spell to be much more useful. It makes sense that it's a Novice spell, though.
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I am a citizen of said nation, but I will not argue with you. You know why? Because nothing you said is wrong. It's ridiculous. I'd much rather the metric system. A base-10 system is much easier than a base-whatever-I-felt-like system. Maybe I'm biased considering I'm really interested in chemistry and physics, both of which use the metric system. (I actually had to go back and edit this to be shorter because I ranted.)
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There haven't been any major hints yet. There has been a couple really small hints but I don't consider them that. Unless you already knew what the other two powers were, you'd never catch them. I will let you know this- one of those other powers will be coming into play relatively soon, even if you don't notice.
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I hope you didn't go avatar on us. While cool I don't think it would fit in that well. Also he wouldn't be the avatar, he would just be a random bloke.
I’d change we to us. Sounds a lot better in my head.
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Or is he?! (Don don, dooooooon)