Ash, a recently deceased man, wakes up in a strange realm with a strange figure claiming to be 'God' nearby. He soon finds himself offered a chance at a new life under one condition; join the game and play by the rules.
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Holy crap, Cadence can be a scary, manipulative monster when she needs to be. Wow. I kind of love it, especially in *this* (semi-)innocent Equestria.
This time sending my editor notes as a PM to avoid littering the comment section. Caught quite a bit of stuff.
Hmm, so she loved before her banishment and it lead her twords the dark. I am gonna Guess it was Sombra, it's the only pony that fit's. Sombra's banishment happened just shortly before Luna became Nightmare Moon and was Banished to her moon. She mentions Starswirl but I be-leave he and the Pillers disappeared some years before the events in the Crystal Empire.
How close am I?
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Well, not enough of the puzzle has been revealed to paint a proper picture just yet. There's enough there to get a general idea, and you're close to it (with her love leading her toward the darkness, but not in the way you are expecting.) It's not Sombra, though. I've also hinted early on at the fact that the timeline isn't the shame as the show, due to me not having seen the newer seasons. Case in point; I have no idea who the 'Pillars' are.
A good chapter. Somethings are revealed and even more are hinted at making this a crazy tangle of questions and answers that we want to untangle with fervor. Looking forward to more also is this before the "Canterlot Wedding" episode? if it is I'm looking forward to seeing what happens between him and Chyssi.
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I personally think you might be right, since the timing fits.
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If you want I can Spoiler Code an short Explanation on the Pillers?
I can't think of who else it would be, I mean I know some things are going to be Different but wouldn't you have to keep some of the major events intact to keep a good timeline? Or is this gonna be one of those Sombra's that banished himself and the Empire to protect it ones?
I guess I have to wait, i really want to see what Nightmare Moon did in this Universe and her Reasons.
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I know right? I really want to see him Mind Fuck Chrysalis and try and talk her down. Much as the mask she puts up she only did that entire "Invasion" for her people and their well being.
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Well, to be 100% honest with you? A lot is different than the show. First of all, be prepared to throw out things involving the Mane Six. They aren't major characters in this story at the moment and likely never will be. As such, certain things you might expect Ash to be involved in might never happen. Outright throw out everything from season five onwards, and even parts of season four, as I haven't seen any of the episodes. Certain major events will happen, however they may not happen according to show lore. There's an Alternate Universe tag for a reason, though it's not entirely drastic such as God-Emperor Celestia ruling the Empire of Ponykind. (Is that a thing? Please tell me it's not a thing.)
As for the explanation of the Pillars, you can if you want to, but it won't affect the story whatsoever.
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Cadence stated in the chapter 'Cadence Arrives' that Shining Armor has yet to propose to her. As such, the Canterlot Wedding has not yet happened. As stated above in this comment, things may or may not be different than what you expect. I won't reveal whether or not it will be altered.
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Hmm, I guess I will have to wait and see what changes. I assume this is set some time between Season 2 and Season 3?
As to that last bit: Yeah....Uh it is Several in that line to be honest.
Are the Elements and the Mane Six even a Thing in this Universe?
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Isn't a Canterlot Wedding the Season 2 finale? That hasn't happened yet so...
And I didn't realize that was a reference to something. I just said that off the top of my head.
Lastly, the Elements are most certainly a thing! The storyline will be different than canon, but still clearly recognizable as set during the series!
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I can't believe I missed that. my bad. Thanks for the reminder. Also sorry to bust your bubble but it is a thing. The God Empress of Ponykind
And it even has a sequel!! The Empress Returns
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A Canterlot wedding is the finally of season two with Discord being freed right after it.
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Isn't that 40k or something like it? Imma read it.....eventually.
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it is 40k as far as I know.
How is it that this story isn’t more popular? I mean seriously, not only does it receive regular updates but it’s really good! It deserves to be featured at least once.
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Timeline is confusing, since Luna is back it is obviously set some time during or after season 1 but not yet season 2.
Bah! I will draw out a Timeline as we go.
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Canterlot Wedding is the end of season 2. Consider this somewhere in the middle of season 2, if that helps whatsoever. My advice is to not worry about the timeline and just read as things go along.
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The reasons why this story isn't as popular as you feel it should be are rather simple. The first and foremost reason is that I'm not an incredibly popular writer, so the number of people who found this by following me is rather low.
While regular updates are great for a story, just as the fact that this book is already the length of a published novel, for a story to gain popularity, time is required. The length, update schedule, and topic are pluses, but it's only two weeks old. Not many people have found it.
On the note of popularity in general, I'm not too worried about it. I started this account to write for myself, making it something of a hobby if you will. I don't particularly care if someone doesn't like my story because I didn't write it for them. On the other edge of that blade, that means I'll never get discouraged from writing!
Though, I won't lie, I do greatly appreciate every single positive comment, like, and view. I try to take the time to reply to most comments, particularly those who can use a reply, and I find myself content at the growing numbers.
(Think I started rambling there!)
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Will do, But I intend to make a timeline of story events in the future.
Well, expect you to get some exposure from some of my friends as I have passed it to my Friends Community Discord
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Well, thank you for that! I have Discord, too, but I only use it for pony-related goodness, such as group servers. In any case, expect the next chapter to go up sometime in the next ten to fifteen minutes!
You know... most stories depict Cadence’s abilities as the Princess of Love as more of a magically focused talent, like being able to see a line of love that connects two individuals and however strong that line is shows how strong their love is.
But your story shows the way a rare few have succeed in portraying her talent.
You show her abilities as a Princess of Love does not entirely rely on her magic but rather on her actual skill in the art of intimate emotions. By the end of this chapter I was left with one lingering thought among the others.
“Dang she’s good.”
So. Cadence is basically a psychiatric mastermind. Kinda comes with the title though, if you look at it realistically. I mean, waving a horn and tossing a spell doesn't fix/repair/encourage love.
Edit: Oh, Gosh!!! I can totally see a SHRINK!Cadence now!!!!