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Sky Trotter


Bearded brony from the beginning that wears silly hats and write stories.

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Before I read this this story better not be another anthro sick and minded mother f****** gay ass story cuz I'm tired of all the anthro MLP Stories being sick minded so I'm going to give it a try then I'm going rate

I'm a huge Percy Jackson fan, and am definitely liking what you've done so far. I'm interested in seeing where this story goes.

Good start, would benefit much from an editor. Even if you can't find one, keep it up!

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Definitely not the plan. I hope to keep it in the same tone as the Percy Jackson series. Of course a bit more mature. But nothing disturbing

I like the Percy Jackson stories and movies and this is pretty good so far but I have to ask, will this be a harem story?

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Well you did put it in the Harem folder so yeah.

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I didn't add this story to any groups. Not to my knowledge at least

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Not from my feed section. You put it in the Human x Anthro in multiple folders. No wait someone named Sargent... Something did.

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My feed some Serjeant guy did it. I have revoked submissions. Thanks for the heads up

SHIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTT

It just got real!

Is mag a oc or someone from the books that idk about?

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He is an OC. Figured with so many demigods running around I could make one up and still have him fit into the mythos

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I forgot which got hecate was been awhile since I did a deep dive into the mythos

Keep an eye out everypony. I should have a new chapter out tonight or tommrow. Just need to do some clean up

Back in the library tree Twilight sat there with confusion on her face “Lavender? I never sent……. OH, MY GODDESS HE COULD SMELL IT!”

:rainbowlaugh: I imagine when she said that her face was red like a tomato for multiple reasons if you catch my meaning :raritywink:

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Kid, you make it sound as if every single anthro story is bad. And to prove my point here's to name but a few.

Star Eater
Wolf Among Ponies & Wolf Among Caribou

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and to be honest. I chose anthro because I am too lazy to remember to use pony anatomy.

I felt a cold bead of sweat drip down the back of my neck “o.Of c.course your highness.” I realized my mistake right away “I.I m.mean Celestia.”

Stammering and the like is marked by dashes not periods, like so: "O-Of c-course your highness."

Other than that, I've noticed a couple grammatical errors here and there, but are largely minor. Most I can say is that it seems like an interesting start, and I would like to see more of it.

Could use some help with grammar, but it's pretty decent.

To me, the Olympians were the mythological versions of the Jedi Council: the only reason we had for supporting them was because the opposing side was worse. Course, that's a bland reason when it feels like they supported the opposing side's increasing ranks by doing nothing.

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I'm using the Percy Jackson Mythos for this story.

*ahem* Hecate, the Goddess of Magic and Secrets.

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Ima go with Mag didn't think they would care about that part.
lolz

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Yeah, I can't imagine it implying anything good for him.

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here is hoping that never gets out around Apple Jack right.:rainbowlaugh:

a percy jackson story without percy jackson, I love it already.

It was a good chapter, but I take issue with the use of marijuana.

To clarify, I have no issue with use for genuine medical reasons, such as glaucoma, and I fully support research into the medical benefits of cannabis oil and so on.
I take GREAT issue with it being used recreationally.
It was the reason why my father had a kidney removed and has been in and out of hospitals for as long as I care to recall.

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You're entitled to your opinion and i am allowed to have mine. I dont want my story comment section to become a political debate. I personally have never seen any medical research that links cannabis with kidney failure. Im not saying it doesn't exist, just that I have never seen any information on it. I personally utilize it to combat severe depression. And as you will notice Mag uses it for the same reason. Fluttershy in this story uses it for anxiety. But this is entirely besides the point. If it really bothers you that much either ignore the reference or don't read the story. I am writing this for me. Give me crtitisisms on my writing style, grammar or vocabulary. Some thing that will help to improve the story. But as far as little plot points that won't have a major impact. That kind of thing will be ignored, because it has no weight on the overreaching plot.

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I apologise. I never intended to come across as claiming to be offended, and I did state that I have no issue with its use, provided there is a legitimate reason, which I do consider depression and anxiety to be.

As for why I included the use of my father as reference, it's because I've had to defend my opinion on the matter enough times that I do so now to avoid arguments.

To return to the original topic, I am fully aware that, as a fictional setting, the use of whatever narcotics you choose is entirely up to you, but I would request that you don't allow it to affect the existing characters to any degree in regards to their canonical progression and development.

What happened in that last scene? was it symbolic or were Celestia and Luna turned into flowers?

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Simbolic. The torch an dittany bush are both symbols of Hecate. I chose the sunflower and moon lillies to represent Luna and Celestia respectively

A dragon pony; more specifically a dragon unicorn is called a kirin. It can also be part Pegasus or ox. It is known for having a horse shaped body with dragon features ex. A scaly hide and a pair of horns and talons. They are also known for having a firey mane, slitted eyes and pointy teeth.

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That was my original idea. However I am utilizing some description from another story that I love "Equestrian Journey" by DFatman. (You should check it out, amazing read) kind of a shout out to him. I just really like the lore that he built, so I kind of incoprated a bit of it into my head cannon. Silver may be making a few more appearances in the future. He is actualy my Boyfriend's OC:twilightblush:

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I am working on improving that. I have had terrible luck keeping editors for some reason. I am currently using an exciting program called Grammerly go edit my stories. He has a nifty tool built into it to help with grammar and word choice.

General comment, I am working on the next chapter, feel like I am about half way through with it. Hopefully I can get it hammered out some time this weekend. Keep your fingers crossed my bronies/pegasisters depending on the monogram you prefer. Stay strong and pony on

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