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This is good.
I need more
Yay I can't wait to read.
Omg it is really good you have improved so much since u started writing great job!
Hmm.
As always interesting beginning. Can't wait for more.
Great job, this is a great improvement from the first version already.
I kinda miss the Dragon Protagonist...
7856412 I figured some of you might, but I feel right with this one. Hopefully you will enjoy it...
Yay fuzzy fluffy cuddles!
If it's anything like your other stories, I know I will.
Good story good job keep it up see you next chapter
7857447 XD! Except he is a direwolf. So he is about that size for the princesses. If not bigger. :P
I couldn't find a dire wolf video
7857501
7857633 Its all good, direwolves are a rare breed. If they even really exist.
Fucking great your story is so far
Well Zemy did say his other female guildmates liked to cuddle up to wolf form. He shouldn't be too surprised. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Damn. It's good.
Cuddling wolf forms? All of my yes.
Uh why make it anthro?
7862571 Why not? :P
7862587 I'm not complaining just surprised that's all and that's cite with the wolf
can't wait for more
The snuggles command them.
Does it have to be italicized
Um no spike what's up with that?
um, Mystogan, your title of the chapter; i think it's supposed to 'SENT to Ponyville', not 'SNET'
also: most of the chapter is in Italics
ALSO: “I got a better idea. How about you leave Ponyville and go back to where ever it is you came from?”
seriously? NO ONE in this chapter is disturbed by Rainbow Dash's insensitive words and that she's being cruel? WHAT THE ACTUAL F*CK?!
You left it in italics.
7866406 I felt it wasn't quite there to get totally upset about, otherwise I would have put something in there.
7866413 Fixed. Thank you.
7866414 yea yea, resilient OC is resilient, but kinda a bit illogical that everyone ignores Dash and her hurtful words.
7866420 I can put something in there real quick if it bothers you so much XD
7866431 nah you don't have to

7866433 Too late, already did it. :P
7866443

Oh shit no spike?.........You got plans for him later......dont you?
7866798 he might be the HIM that celestia and Luna were talking about
7857122
I do, but the wolf form makes up for that
So that's why they need him to combat Sombra in place of Spike.
I much prefer this over the previous version, good job man. :D
Good job keep it up see you next chapter
At least he came clean
Did i see a dragon age refrence?
7878329 Yes you did!
7878255 Thanks bud. Glad you like it. :)
That pickpocket neverstood a chance did he? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Was that a varric reference when the pickpocket ed hawk and he shoot him in the shoulder? Dragon age 2?
7879381 Sure is. :P