• Member Since 20th Jul, 2017
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Dont Forget Me

When I die, don't come to my grave to tell me how much you love me and how much you miss me, because those are the words I want to hear while I'm still alive... When I Die, You'll Love Me

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you are welcome
I followed because I wanted to.!:flutterrage:
some problem ?:fluttercry:

Comment posted by CaioCoia deleted Jul 1st, 2018

First off I, personally, would try harder to please people who would read the story that I write, even without ANY information on what's wrong with it. If you don't secedetry andtry again, at least until the readers are happy. And, to go back on the original issue, attacking someone like "Hamster_Master" just because they give a story a bad rating and dislike makes it sound like you have no common sense here. Contact me again if you are willing to drop those negative comments off my user page.


Constructive Criticism is better than criticism alone. I'll ask you again; Can you improve your story if I bashed you but never offered any advice on how to improve? no, you wouldn't. All you'll know is that your story is bad and you'll never how its bad, why its bad, what part is bad or even know how to improve it. All I would end up doing, is discouraging you into deleting your story. Come back when your common sense kicks in.

Have a nice day~

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