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Talion
Story will be released as I think of them and have time to write them.
Talion
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A bit fast and short for my taste, but I think this is going to be interesting, but I suggest you use Google doc or Grammarly so there won't be too many errors in your Chapters.
fun to read. just need more chapters
Ooooh looks ilke fun.
>Rated ‘Mature’
>Censors the “fuck” words.
Am I being baited?
hmm... im glad you have a different start from don't get cocky. i'll keep an eye out for more
You got 1 up . 👍👏Now continue ✍🔰
As seras Victoria in hellsing ultimate abridged said “oh fuck the hell yes” I love it it’s like, don’t you dare, don’t underestimate me, and the og don’t get cocky sept not in the same world god speed you magnificent basterd and make more of this.
I will need more chapters on this story
Ok wth I'm getting dejavu
MORE!
Too bad you didn't involve Tokyo ghoul powers in it
I'm sorry. A NORMAL, uneventful life, but you are a physics AND history teacher at Harvard? One of the most well know ivy league schools in America? There is nothing Normal about that.
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Thank you for pointing that out I just fixed it
8947162 I am sadly going to have to agree with you on this one Hamster.
Great next chapter but I was wondering if it is possible that they can come out sooner. Don't rush them if you can't though.
Honestly the story itself has potential, but so far the 2nd chapter can be skipped. It's just a list of Copy Pasted skills, which honestly no one reads or remembers, and many of them wont even be used in the story I bet.
1st chapter was introduction, 2nd chapter is explanation of skills that was A LOT longer than it should have been and not really necessary in my opinion.
I hope the 3rd chapter is the start of the actual story and there would be some progress in it.
Sorry for the criticism. I hope this will be in any way helpful.
Wow, and I thought the main Character of my Story was op...
Awesome!!!
oh, I just realized you took inspiration from star eater and don't get cocky right? cause I'm not mad about it, I'm ECSTATIC IT'S AWESOME,
thanks for doing that btw, cause I miss don't underestimate me which was supposed to be a renewal of don't get cocky but the mods said no that's plagiarism even though the guy who made don't get cocky is dead (rip) they removed both of them and I'm calling bs.
Oh and thanks for continued work on this marvel of a fic
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I couldn't have said it better.
What kind of powers would Buzz Aldrin have? Do you call him and a space shuttle crashes into your enemy like this.
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Thank you for pointing that out to me I just fixed it
Not much I can say we will just have to wait till next chapter because there wasn't much to this one
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OMNI:Here go nuts... https://www.fimfiction.net/story/401825/dont-you-dare
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Yes I know but it’s just not the same as a Gary Stu bruh don’t you dare is not a Gary Stu story
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OMNI:Eh...fair enough.
...Do you need an editor?
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Yes
9180109
Aww thank you, I feel flattered
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I am available. PM me a docs link.
One million years later.....
(I wonder how that would affect his mentality?)
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An interesting concept to play with if I have time
How does one realise when their time in the chamber is up? It's not like you just realise that a thousand years have passed, and it's definitely not like he can just count the time in his head. Disregarding him sleeping at all, I doubt he could count to 31,557,600,000 seconds in his head
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To wait and see. Also, great job with the math
Three things 1: this is awesome and you should feel awesome!
2: what is the upload schedule if you have one for this? And 3: Can we have more!?
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There is no set schedule I'm going to try to release a chapter once a month and there will definitely be more. If something happens to cause delay in release of a chapter I will inform everyone.
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Damn that was fast... But thanks for the answer! Good to know I will look forward to the next chap!!!
This is amazing and awesome I hope you can continue making more
More :3
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Grammarly
I'm looking forward to what happens "NEXT TIME ON,I HAVE THE POWER OF GODS"
Oh celestia you batter not fuck with this one
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Technically it'd only work on villains and creatures in the Everfree Forest since ponies was rather.. Shall we go with skittish or overly innocent?
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Lawl.
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Oh. Its you.
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Don't like? Don't read.
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*le-sigh*
Why are people so judgemental? If you don't like it, would you kindly go fuck off somewhere else? I get it. Its not perfect, but it ain't the worst either.
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Boo hoo.
Actually the Byakugan was second.
Author is your story still alive?
You to. Good to see a Skyrim fan.
When is the next update?