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The Loner
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I hope you don't actually learn the thuum because only a very very select few can even manage to learn and speak one word without many years of training according to the greybeards. The magic is more doable but Twilight uses her horn to do so but otherwise interesting story.
A lot of what happens feels convenient for the main characters like star swirl just so happens to know a dead language thats 70,000 years old and have a book in that language that just so happens to have a language for a prophecy that just so happens to have one for him the princesses and the elements.
The Dragonborn just casually sleeps off 70,000 years.
I love it.
don't worry, it isn't convenience...will explain soon just wait for next chapter
Author I really want to believe you then you put this in because this from a antique book in the chapter.
Minor nitpick I know
If it took a lifetime for Jurgen Windcaller, the Greybeards, and Ulfirc Stormcloak to learn the Thuum, Twilight should NOT have an easy time just learning it. That’s downright cheating! Besides, Twilight’s not really gonna use the spells she learned- if it ain’t theoretical, she won’t use it.
Oh Garble, you dumbass.
don't worry HB I know and I hear you lol. OK Pederson I have fixed that incorrect word, the reason I did that was because the spell is kind of blood magic that has to be drank by the one being restored. The way I see it the magic is in the alicorn's blood so it will draw from them through that link
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Hey you do you. I come across story's were it really detailed like it take blood of a alicorn on the 3rd day of the month while listening to YMCA at 4 pm while wearing a clown costume.
What happened to story's having vague spell requirements from ancient books
Thanks for the warning, I hate needles.
I know some people faint at the mention of needles or blood, so I just thought to give you guys/girls the common courtesy of forewarning you and coloring the mentioned section and made it identifiable. So you are welcome
Damn it!!
Here you all go, here is the latest chapter, hope you enjoy it!
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70 thousand years feels kinda short for everything to change. Never liked the Thalmor, I've been permanently on their shitlist every single playthrough starting in Helgen (might be mod conflicts causing it). Very first time I encounter them in every playthrough, they always try to frag me.
His children/foals will be able to use The Voice? The Dragonborn has the SOUL of a dragon, not blood. Pretty sure you can't pass down part of your soul to your offspring.
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as someone once said, "Wait and see" lmao
Really? The ponies are horrified by what he did to the Aldmeri? I've had dreams that make the most hardcore horror films look like Sesame Street.
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I mean he's parents are gods?
Really good and well written story and I hope to see more as soon as possible! Keep up the awesome work!
Oh hey my comment was deleted, I wonder why.
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Yeah I deleted it out of anger because if you can't see that he is putting on an act for the others to show he is fine, you need to start reading a bit deeper because I am writing the character's personality in with the actions he makes. I can't believe that I was doing that until I read back through my story to look for something specific I said earlier for the next chapter, by the way I don't plan what I write in advance. I am just a writer that allows his brain to write what it wants within certain boundaries for each chapter.
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I'm sure you're aware that deleting someone's comment because you disagree or it bothers you whether the common is good bad or indifferent, is a bad idea, because it sets a precedent in your comment section and for you're story.
That first word is supposed to be “IIZ”, not “LIZ”
Aside from that I’m liking this so far!
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I apologize for deleting your comment.
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Thanks for catching that screwup, let me know if you find anything else that conflicts with what is written so far, or is just incorrect.
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I appreciate that. It seems you've learned from your mistake and broken the cycle in your mind. You can now take criticism, with a grain of salt whether it be good bad or indifferent. Embrace it and make your stories better.
I was planning on making this another bad ass chapter, but my brain had other ideas. Hope you enjoy the twists and wtf moments, try not to die laughing or break an ankle trudging through this chapter riddled with gopher holes! 🤣
Putting "saying" or "comments" before anyone speaks is really irritating, I dont think I know any other story that does this
Hmmm it’s going good so far but I do hope he gets a brake after this fight to to allow some character development between our MC and everyone else for if it’s just fight after fight it can and tends to get boring so I do hope to see a grace period so to say to allow some character development between everyone to happen. Can’t wait to see more.
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lol don't worry, he will get a break alright...just wait till I put in the last few paragraphs. This next chapter will be done within a day.
10119610 Look forward to it.
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Bayott needs to be careful or he may find mares seeking his affection (Thoguh Mara would LOVE some grandkids)
Also: Stop reminding me that I havnt finished my Skyrim run yet!
substituted prisoners with empty cells to work better and make sense.
Did Bayott know that using the shout was bad and I missed it? If not, hope Mara feels bad about herself later.
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nope, he had no Idea that it was bad. Wait and see... Wait and see...
Honestly I'm less than a quarter of reading this chapter, and it just sounds like rambling. Slow down, take a breath.
An extremely small nitpick on an otherwise amazing fic but Garble is Smolder's older brother, not just a friend. So maybe a bit stronger of a reaction is warranted from Smolder from seeing her brother literally die right before her eyes. Again, a small nitpick on an even smaller detail on a fic I have already read through twice, and currently going through a third.
i think he should take the punishment then explain that this is the gods fault they set a man with his history down a path to save the mortal world once more. he will do anything to do so pay any price and do anything to complete his quest and they know him
The moment they set him on this path every action he takes is there fault and more importantly if they can punish him WTF are they not punishing the fucking EATER OF WORLDS
The gods lack of action if at fault, the gods creation is at fault and if they leave the inhabitants of a world to deal with its problem then they cant complain about how it is done
the only job he has is to save this world no other no matter how much damage he dose to other worlds that not his job again the gods are wrong here
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thanks for the update, didn't know that they were family. got it fixed
10121192 I agree with this assessment and hope ya incorporate it somehow into the story 10121453 but other then that very good so far and can’t wait for more.
Sorry all, I am going to change that part about his children being able to shout, to have a chance to be able to inherit the ability.
I am also changing up the description of Mara to make better sense in future chapters to a misty rose pink and silver.
Does Dragonbane wait for it's rightful bearer once again in the ruins of Sky Haven Temple? Let us find out together my faithful companions.
hey fam, im gonna nap.. wake me up in a reasonable time
poor guy
I still think those gods should have told him what shout to use and what not to use.
Hmmmm ... truthfully being a god dragon you'd figure alduin would see rape beneath him an act for a lesser being. I mean his thoughts should be any female dragon should present themselves to him with but a word as their lucky for him to have chosen them. Having one cry should be a turn off and make him angry at a dragon acting so weak you figure.
How will Alduin even succeed in his conquest of this poor dragon? She is probably a good 1/3 his size and not to mention the massive size difference of his junk compared to hers. I know that this is fiction and hentai rules will apply but if she is normal size for a modern dragon then Alduin will have to be somewhat flexible to even reach his mark, let alone breed her. And that begs another question: Will he even be able to? Considering that they are the same species then yes, in theory. But then again she is a modern dragon while Alduin is an ancient dragon. The genes may have changed to be incompatible with each other due to the massive time gap between the end of TES:V and when this fic takes place. Or will there be just enough genes to be compatible and result in a pregnancy?
Why am I over analyzing a fictional crossover story about 2 fictional characters having sex? What has my life come to?