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A bit of work on grammar and usage of some words, like you used deer, instead of dear, and shocked her head, instead of shook her head, but overall a good story, i hope you continue this story
:)
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thanks, my dyslexia get's the best of me some times 😅
It's alright man, i like the story so far :)
Can't wait for more chapters
Just found this story and it’s interesting to see a MLP DBZ story base on the xenoverse games events
Keep up the good work
Also I like the color coding idea
(Also I send you a pm message hopefully you could respond to it soon)
Almost as big as who? Nightmare Moon? Actually, Celestia and Luna aren't even 139 in terms of power levels, and neither is Nightmare Moon. Roshi is, and he blew up the moon. With all Equestria's magic, Tirek was stated to have only been capable of being able to blow up the continent of Equestria in the comics.
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interesting, that helps me put a good idea for the next chapters thank you
Good story keep up the good work and I give this story a 9 out 59
Amazing chapter! Definitely worth the wait
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Yes, yes they are
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oh I’m looking forward to seeing more of them then 
Does Pan and/or Bra appear in this story?
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hmm I actually never thought of it if I should bring more DBZ people in it so thats a good thought
This should be interesting also best way to beat something in xenoverse is by spamming super spirit bomb
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to true
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Or if you wanna finish something real fast Emperor Death Beam all the way
Amazing chapter! Definitely worth the wait
And oh boi. The misunderstanding trope this will not end so very good
Amazing chapter my friend! This was definitely worth the wait. I enjoyed it very much
I completely agree with MLPFan1. It was awesome but I really hate to be that guy
but you misspelled celestia with Clestia and teleportation with Teloprtain. Otherwise I enjoyed this very much and can't wait for more
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Thank you and noted.
Hi! Are you still making stuff?
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I am indeed, but I'm just doing some stuff and making new stories as well
Gostei continue.
Amazing chapter my friend! It’s so amazing to see this story get updated again
Am I the only one who laughed so hard you wheezed? 'Cause when I first read this My mind buffered then rebooted and processed what I read then laughed hard.
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That's the idea! Tell me I'm wrong though? Tell me Celestia and Luna aren't just like Goku and Vegeta 😏