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Interesting. The start was a bit intriguing and well made, but there was a lot of information, too much in my opinion, although I wouldn't call it rushed. A lot of people are not going to be happy about the whole Alicorn thing, I am talking about experience, but besides that, I think it's going to be a good story.

Solo Level

i looked at the first chapter of "Solo Leveling" manga and i like it. i hope this story can live up to it

I like it . Make more please

Pretty interesting....
I need more

Might want to put this in the looking for editors group as the grammar is atrocious

(“I am enjoying this. A nurse with huge juggs but too bad I'm only a few moments old.”) The nurse brought me to a room filled with infants of different species. I was baffled by the different creatures within this universe; an insectoid creature inside of a transparent cocoon, an infant minotaur with baby horns, some canine puppies inside a playpen sleeping, a seahorse-like anthropomorphic baby sleeping in a water horse-like actual griffin roasting in a nest, even a freaking centaur. The nurse placed me in a crib, shush me to go to sleep. I pretended to fall asleep as the nurse left the room and shut off the lights. I opened my eyes to see that the room was quiet as a church at midnight.

wait, they are planning on eating that baby griffin? get them *army of bird lovers takes up torches and pitchforks to take up the cause* finally find a use for those old things.

Hymn ... will celestias power still effect him in the dungeons. Also will dungeons he uses keys for have time limits... because he could open a e rank dungeon and turn it into a base after clearing out all monsters but the boss. If its a undead dungeon it probably means a undead boss meaning the boss wont starve to death meaning he can wall off or colapse the area leading upto the boss.

PLEASE FOR ALL THAT IS HOLY MOOOAAARRRR!!!!!!!😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻😻🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Reincarnation... Got to love it :heart: Winged Unicorn?

Greetings. Can i ask you how i set the reading limits in your Storys? It seem to slipped me so far.

Glorious humor :pinkiehappy:

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The format of quite a few chapter still need editing... Just like I edited this 2019 comment to add stuff.

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Hes a Hybrid it seems. Winged Unicorn or horned Pegasus?

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He has the horn of a Unicorn, the wings of a Pegasus, the genitalia of a Earthponys, the hunting instinct of a Thestral (human actualy).
Alicorn from the start? What a renegade upon life!

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Solo... I wonder if he will shot first :trollestia:

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And get a living fluffy carpet walking on legs as partner.

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Indeed a Story worth waiting for :raritystarry:

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Even when polishing would be needed here or there. I am guilty of that one myself :twilightblush:

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Isnt that a bird Term? Like with Horses: "Breaking em in" - teaching em to accept riders on there backs . And so on...

That Name finding... PRICELESS :trollestia:

Holy Shit... Was that execution accepted by Celestia or not! That makes a massiv differance... did the murderers get punished?

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Both is acceptable

I hope Nightmare meets Solo at some point in the future. Damn fine humor and situation analyse

This missions... Nice :trollestia:

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Depending on the variations hes better at flying or spellcasting

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Your a bloody Genius :pinkiehappy:

You can archiv only so mutch 'Solo'. Together your stronger :raritywink: Im going to have a fieldday with his name based puns :pinkiehappy:

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No, the word they were looking for was roosting, being the avian form of resting. Roasting is a method of cooking that often involves a bird of some sort. Thus, my horror.

Im a bit conserned about hes being covered in blood and her Sister isnt even phased about it... Or was she in shock?

'Shield Hero' has audiobooks in Youtube worth 30 plus hours uncut! I strongly recommended it!!!

(“Great… so I’m in an alternate universe, I’m an infant evolved anthropomorphic animal and I have to waste my years trying to talk and walk. What else does this world have besides some evolved animals?”) A door knocked.

“Come in." The door opened as a sexy female minotaur with a hot body in a professional nurse’s uniform.

(“Okay! I am loving what this universe have!”)
YOU DON'T SAY!!!!!!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

“No. Your infant child has both the horn of a unicorn and the wings of a Pegasus.” All the family members looked horrified as they all looked at me.

Don't forget about the Earth Pony part, if so. Could be a recessive trait in his parents. :unsuresweetie:

Also if you capitalize Pegasus, you should do that for Unicorn.

“Well… I was thinking of Sky Trooper since he has the eyes of a troop.” Said Mother but Father didn’t like it.

“Sky? I thinking of Magic Caster be more appropriate.” Answered Father but Mother showed some anger.

Sky Caster? Over Cast?

Omg more please and what his level mah men

Yes. I am pleased to see u are here

(“Is this the right decision, Luna?”)[/quote




yea it is cause if luna found out about colts and fillies being kidnapped by slavers and the "nobles" were behind it then they are gonna face a level 9010 angry moon goddess

I am really enjoying this story keep it up

Ahhh so celestia wasn't evil it was just nobles doing whatever they felt their entitled to. Oh and starswirls either racist,incompetent, or corrupt take your pick. Will the main 6 be in this story. With the captain being fired I thought we might see shining.

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Thanks for the Info

Amazing details. Why wasnt Celestia shocked to see him having Horn ( for Magic use ) Wings ( for flight ) and apperantly earthpony like strength?

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he was hiding his wings in his clothes

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Didnt think wings can be folded that mutch. Thanks

"do not read unless you are over 18+ or with an adult."
*looks behind me*
*parent leaning over shoulder staring at the screen*
"You need a adult."
"I am a adult"
"You need a better adult."
"Fair enough"

At the moon “Ah-cchoo!” Sneezed, Nightmare Moon, as she looked at the planet “Did somepony actually said good things about me?!”

say
To take a quote from Yu-Yu-Hakushou,

"Sneezy Sneezy! Achoo achoo! Someone special is thinking about you!"

(“I really hated the last quest, my childhood with shots ended with me, kicking & screaming. Oh, how I hate shots.”)

I can relate! It used to take four people to hold kid-me down long enough.

“Huh huh.” Said Bo.

“Hmm…?” Said Solo as he looked at Bo.

“Huh huh.” Repeated Bo.

Use your words!

“Really Captain Stronghold.” Stronghold paused as he was sweating bullets as he turns around slowly to see Princess Celestia herself, extremely pissed off “Because I swear I didn’t appoint you as Captain to harass creatures of different races?” Solo snickered as everyone looked at him.

Oh dear. This is going to be unfortunate for somepony. :ajsmug:

In the castle, at the highest balcony Solo was sitting at a table with Jelly, Sky & the princess, having tea & honey coated baskets. “These are so good!” Said Sky.

I take it you mean biscuits. I can understand the rest (typos aside) but... honey coated baskets?

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