Might want to put this in the looking for editors group as the grammar is atrocious

Reincarnation... Got to love it Winged Unicorn?

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I love it anyway

Greetings. Can i ask you how i set the reading limits in your Storys? It seem to slipped me so far.

(“Great… so I’m in an alternate universe, I’m an infant evolved anthropomorphic animal and I have to waste my years trying to talk and walk. What else does this world have besides some evolved animals?”) A door knocked.

“Come in." The door opened as a sexy female minotaur with a hot body in a professional nurse’s uniform.

(“Okay! I am loving what this universe have!”)
YOU DON'T SAY!!!!!!!😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

“No. Your infant child has both the horn of a unicorn and the wings of a Pegasus.” All the family members looked horrified as they all looked at me.

Don't forget about the Earth Pony part, if so. Could be a recessive trait in his parents.

Also if you capitalize Pegasus, you should do that for Unicorn.

(“Alphacorn?”)

All hail alphacorn: god king of the corn empire

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Can you send me a working link?

Alicorn have all 3 tribes traids he seem only to own two...

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Um... Aren't all ponies pony-shaped?

Sort of?

I mean, if he had neither, he'd be a plain-old earth pony, so yeah - he has all three. Not sure about the confusion there.

“All I want is my boy is to be whatever he wants to be.”

Oooookkkkkkkk~ I'm reading

I feel a human being born in a anthro world would have been hilarious drama with the parents and such. I'm guessing being self aware upon birth is a + too.

“He’s an Alicorn!” Yelled Huntsman.

how did they not notice that till now? I mean he may be in Euphoria right now for getting a new son, but I still feel like at least the father would notice

Time to re-reading this beauty

“We have made a discovery about your infant son! You might want to keep this information hidden from your princess.” Huntsman and his family looked worried as XXXX looked curious.

The doctors would actually report this to the princess unless alicorns are seen as something evil or the current ruler(s) are afraid that an alicorn will take their place.

(“Solo? My name is XXXX . Huh? XXXX ? What the fuck! Why is my name being bleeped? It’s a common name! J-O-H-N XXXX . FUCK!”) XXXX began to fuzz up as Huntsman calm him down.

Reminds me of how, of late, i've lost the ability to swear. Like I can say "F-word" but i can't say "F***"

Sooo... How do parents get away with discarding their child? Isn't that against the law?

The psycho hunter was in a deadly battle with Guild Master, I was trying to heal my wounds as the psycho was being backed into a corner. She looked around for a weapon but found me instead and used me as a human shield. She threatens my guild master that if he didn’t let her go, she’d kill me and that was something I couldn’t allow.

A murder happy insane using living shields? It's obvious that they die if the insane isn't taken out first.

“No. Your infant child has both the horn of a unicorn and the wings of a Pegasus.” All the family members looked horrified as they all looked at me.

Why is that? Is it illegal to be born a Alicorn?
Renegade for life?