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naturalbornderpy


Just a nice, polite Canadian.

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Everypony thinks they know the real reason why Twist is named Twist. Something to do with candy or the like.

Turns out, hidden inside her personal notebook is a long list of twists.

And most of these twists even end up coming true.

Like how she finally got a Father to call all her own.


Artwork by Twist-a-Loo. One character tag omitted due to Twist.

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Comments ( 46 )

good fanfic =3

made me literally bark in surprise

What and why and yes.

8370735
Damn, I was going to do that.

This entire fic was a twist :twilightsmile:

Set

Some Twists were better left unraveled, she thought.

I hate you so much...

SO MANY TWISTS!!! :applejackconfused:

“Even mean?” Discord finished. “It’s quite simple, Liberty Belle.

wut

“Shush now, Cheerilee,” the stallion said, holding a hoof to her lips. “We have a lot to talk about now. Which, by the way… can I crash on your couch for a while?” Anxiously, Miss Cheerilee wiped at her shimmering eyes, before yelling to the class. “Alright, everypony! Class dismissed! Please… umm… continue to work on whatever it is we were just working on!”

Is this implying incest, mad Cheerilee, or what, there're just so many twists

Doesn't That mean that her first twist did come true on its own then?
And if the first twist was true, and by that twist she was given glimpses into the future to make even more correct twists, does that mean she actually does have twist powers but only indirectly? Like, she has the power to glimpe surprising events in the future, and by writing them down she is essentially writung prophecies?
It's too late at night for this

So, there wasn't actually a Twist Note?

...

That's sad. I am sad.

So the big twist is that Twist cannot make twists. Discord just makes her think it's a twist.
:twilightoops: Twisty.

The only one with twist powers is...

THE SHYAMALAN! *pokes people in the forehead* You have all now been Shyamalized. :applejackconfused:

His scowl softened to a grimace as she returned to the book.

Feel like that's supposed to be a 'he', unless you're writing a gender-fluid Discord.

doesn’t make much sense… somehow make’s sense? 

Why the apostrophe?

At first I thought it was going to go the obvious route and include Shyamalan as her dad, until I just realized :ajbemused: no.

8371943
But he kind of sucks at it. Well, ok, the Visit was a good twist, but I wouldn't necessarily say that makes it a good movie. And no, I haven't seen Split.

8371468
I understood it this way: (might be wrong)
Discord was once thinking, what chaotic thing he could do, and it resulted in the first "twist." He chose a filly with a suiting name and gave her the first dream, that she could use twists instead of wishes.

So someday Twist will grow up to become a crappy director?

The return of the Hayburger’s special dipping sauce!?

Discord: "Because that's -- that's what this is all about, Twist.
Twist: Dipping Sauce?
Discord: That's my one-armed stallion! That's my series arc, Twist.
Twist: What the Tartarus?
Discord: If it takes nine seasons of MLP, I want my Hayburger's dipping sauce, Twist.

The reveal of Princess Celestia’s ‘Twilight Goes Evil for Some Reason’ backup plan;

This made me terribly excited as I thought about how Twilight would be driven to evil as a result of reading this document.

8372456
May this dipping sauce perhaps be the
Szechuan Chicken McNugget Sauce

Speaking as the person who named Twist's mother Em White Shyamenthol, I approve of this.

What a twist! Thumbs up.

The fact that your story about Twist making twists doesn't end with a twist is... kind of a twist. :derpyderp1:

Upvoted and faved JUST BECAUSE TWIST.

Ayyy, a reason to like Twist. Not that I ever hated her, but this is cool.

I always appreciate a story and/or author that takes a widely-panned character, flips 'em around, gives them a new feel and drums up some reasoning as to why they're worthy of being appreciated. You did just that with Twist, as you've done with other characters.

I need to pick up on what you're throwing down.

Maybe Twist's lack of a lisp is a twist in and of itself.

So twisty and awesome. 10/10

8372398 Yeahhhh... that's why I used Nostalgia Critic's clip there.

Like, shouldn’t there be one last twist to end them all? 

One twist to end them all.
One twist to find them.
One twist to bring them all, and in the darkness bind--wait, what?

8374069 Sadly, I tend to write only about particular characters: Sombra, Discord, Twilight, the Princesses.

I really need to force myself to write different characters sometimes. Or genres other than comedy/dark.

One day! :facehoof:

8373811 :twistnerd: Thanks!

8373483 You earn both a :twilightsheepish: and a :facehoof:. Sadly, they cancel each other out.

8372958 Somebody write it! :flutterrage: Now!

8371639 Yep. Makes perfect sense to me. :derpytongue2:

8371201 :twistnerd::twistnerd::twistnerd: You can't stop what's coming, Twi. :twistnerd::twistnerd::twistnerd:

8371199 But... but I love you, random internet person. :fluttershysad:

8370671 What does that even sound like, pray tell? :rainbowhuh:

8374332
Bruh, complacency finds us all. I write Spike to an unhealthy degree which may or may not require therapy in the near future. But, as long as you're writing stuff that makes you smile, that's what matters.

8374173
NC's another story entirely. Long story short: I was a fan of him for about a few years, and then his stuff just got old and tired and quite frankly, he might have let his fame get to him.

8374332
I also write about Twilight too much. :twilightsmile: Best pony!

I can hardly believe how well this works considering the character pairing at the center of this.

Well played, sir. Take my upvote!

Ba-ba-bananna bread~

8374593 Uhm... I think you're missing the point of my posting the clip. It was to poke fun at Shyamalan. That was all.

8376033
Oh, I know. I just like calling out NC on being a sellout whenever I get the chance.

8376111 Everyone's a sellout as soon as they can make money. :raritywink:

8383846
I would like to believe I'd try and avoid that.

8384529 *offers you 12 billion dollars to become a spokesperson for the Emoji Movie* You know you want to... :trixieshiftright:

8385635
Alright... but nobody said I couldn't subtly sabotage the movie after I get paid. :trollestia:

8385652 I think the writers already sabotaged it as badly as possible.

The sad part is, there were enough idiots out there to make it profitable. By tens of millions of dollars. Humanity has just proven that they are willing to reward cinematic raw sewage. We're doomed. :facehoof:

8385683
Didn't it bomb the first few weeks it was out?

8385934 It wasn't a bomb it's opening weekend. It made half its budget back on week 1 alone.

It cost about $50 million to make, and at last count it was at $124 million gross worldwide, meaning it has made a solid profit now even accounting for marketing and distribution costs.

Basically, the human race has rewarded Sony for creating truly epic failure. :facehoof:

8387484
Not THIS member of it. Though I DID admittedly watch Iron Fist on Netflix. But unless Marvel does what it usually does with the films and legit LISTENS to the criticism, specifically about Danny Rand and creates a BETTER product the next go around, I WILL NOT watch it. I don't care what events are referenced or what others will be built up from that season; if it sucks, ain't got no fucks.

Um this reminds me about the movie goosebumps and the line

The three parts of a book
The beginning
The middle
And a twist

Over all it was good I like how twist was a character most everyone I meet hates her as much as they hate jar jar binks I don't know why tho and a question will there be a sequel to this story where it reveals twists mother (twist it is twilight) idk :P anyway keep up the good work

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