A female brony with a love for FlutterDash and a passion for writing.
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Dont worry twist your not crazy.
Everyone else is.
Isnt that right fred?
*Stares at his buddy fred the muffin*
Wow fred you sure are smart
Whats that?
*"fred" the muffin just sits there*
Of course i wont let that mean grey pegasus eat you.
This fic... it's a nice way of expressing schizophrenia. A certain way, definately different from mine, I don't see silver, and they don't nessesarily convince me to try to kill myself, but other than that, yeah, that's pretty much it.
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I really don't know all that much about schizophrenia other than what I've been told and what I've read online, so I'm happy to know that this interpretation somewhat succeeded!
And this was supposed to be a much more severe case explaining the voices telling Twist she's worthless; also, the silver represented the tears that Twist was shedding every day.
However, I'm glad you enjoyed.
3395903 Yeah, I guess you did a really good job with this.
This was interesting. Good job.
I personally have very severe schizophrenia, but it's not much like this. Then again everybody suffers differently, for example whereas Twist is duped into attempted suicide by her others, I merely am forced to whisper whatever they speak - like an impulse, I can't stop myself.
Interesting concept however, especially considering I'll be writing for a character like this soon. Nice job.
This is criminally underappreciated.
Could probably use more polish.
Keep writing.
A bit short, but I liked it. Well done.
3408976 I disagree. seeing as the story is told from Twist's POV in her head with no external dialogue I think it's written just perfect.:rarity wink:
I wouldn't be surprised if she didn't paint the red stripes on her candy canes anymore. poor Twist. Much love for this filly and the new spin you took on her personality.
what a !
3408976 What about for those of us who don't speak Polish? (What an interesting to the joke!)
wow... that was incredible
I'm so relieved that she lived. I was so sad at the end of the first chapter. Still very sad but she can get through this together with her dad.
scary shit, man
I kind of felt bad for twist in this story
I genuinely feel bad for Twist...
But who isn't crazy? I stay up until 6AM talking to my dog plushie i got when i was in 2nd grade.