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Hi I'm Hollyfern! Aspiring doctor that tries his hoof at fanfics. I Would very much like feedback! I typically can and will write about my darling filly Silver Spoon!


Sequel of Moving On: Silver Spoon's Story

Edited by- Lewie!
Many thanks to Steel Resolve & Comma-Kazie

Having faced and surpassed the challenge of making new friends, Silver Spoon's tranquil and simplistic world comes to an abrupt halt once family obligations begin to lurk in her shadow. With the help of the crusaders, Silver Spoon and co. uncover a Silver family secret that could possibly shift the fate of all of Ponyville.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 285 )

Huh, wasn't expecting a sequel after all this time. Interesting. I liked the original, so let's see how this goes. :duck:

Hmm, I don't remember anything about Cheerilee being Scootaloo's sister in the first story, though.

there wasn't but like you say I'm going to wait and watch and see what happens

1158012 You see, It was one of those points that was suppose to be in the original, but it felt out of place so I didn't mention it. :duck:

Which story is this a sequel to? I should probably read that first :twilightsheepish:

I chuckled at the Phineas and Ferb reference. I also think I know what your hinting at with Mac's order.

Last thing, when are you gonna continue Scootaloo's Story? If you plan to continue it, that is. :twilightsheepish:

1165136 I will get around to it eventually. :duck:

Twitht'th accent ith a bit hard to read but that makth it tho much more fun to read.
"Lean on her, girls."
"Headache with pictures!"

Well, this was a lot more entertaining than I thought it was going to be. I approve of this.

Sadly, I lack the time to read this at the moment. But I'm going to break one of my rules and fav before reading because I'm certain I'll love this.

Will read as soon as I have finished a few others. Enjoyed the first, I am sure I will enjoy this one as well! :twilightsmile:

Yep, loving this. The way you write these foals is just perfect, especially Silvy and Scoots. Keep it up!

Loved the first story, loving this. Really like the noir parts. Only thing is that I find some of Twist's dialogue incomprehensible. Any chance of dialing the lisp back a little?

Ooo, a sequel!

I loved the original story and I'm liking this so far. :scootangel:

Yeah, I got totally confused about Scootaloos sisters too. I'm so used to her being homeless and unloved, lol!!!

Wait, that was way too straight forward. Everything points to marriage. So... I am going say its not marriage and there's a twist coming!! :twistnerd:

Gonna go with Seether on this, way too straightforward to actually be marriage. What're you up too?

Or it really is marriage and that's the twist!
BigMac better steps up his game before those CMC "accidentally" spill the beans. :scootangel:
And "Mudkip" is so an insult!

I have no shame.
As far as the marriage thing goes, I'm thinking they'll be given a very convincing alternate explanation, but then they'll (Big Mac and Cheerilee) throw the ol' switcheroo on 'em.

sweet read though i'm not sure about a few things as the fillies will be finding out more


Everypony looked to Twist who shrugged. “I don’t know,” she shook her head. “A sewing machine, cloth, buttons and needles from the market—who knows?”

Either that line was supposed to be said by someone else, or you forgot Twist's lisp all of a sudden. (Or you're trying to tell us that her lisp isn't as bad as she'd have us believe. :twistnerd:)

... Oh my... I might have to re-read Moving On to remember what happened! xD I can't remember if Silver and Sweetie are just really good friends, or if they're PRACTICALLY dating. (I know there's not romance tag, so there's no shipping, but more like... friend-shipping? IDK. I'm sick, so I can't verbalize my thoughts as well, sorry.)

Yeah! They hath thome extphlinationth to give!

Or is the twist that mac knocked her up, and is now proposing to deal with the issue. That might well explain Cheerilee's short temper earlier.:eeyup:

Cheerilee is preggers.



Hmm, going with either 1. Cheerilee is pregnate and Big Mac is marrying her just to make everything all nobel and honorable and stuff or 2. There's a completely different reason behind all of this and Hollyfern just chucked us a huge curveball. :pinkiehappy: I can't wait either way!

Awwwwww, Sweetie Belle is adorable in this chapter!! :unsuresweetie:

Loved that Futurama reference.

I must say I'm a bit curious about this sequel. :unsuresweetie:

So please do keep up the good work upon such a great start of a wonderful storyline.:scootangel:

1206492 I will and thank you for reading~

Wow you've got me hooked right off the bat my friend! :pinkiehappy:

Wow quite an intresting plot you have going, I think I know what Big Macintosh and Cheerilee are planning. :eeyup:

1198335 Cheerilee PREGNANT? Now that's a site for sore eyes! :fluttershyouch:

1206941 Well think about it, she's not exactly the type of mare you think would get into such a situation, you think she would know better being a teacher and all. :pinkiesick:

1206963 I can see that. Though, teachers do sometimes have children. :raritywink:

From the middle point of the first story and onwards I've picked a lil' bit of romantic affections from Silver Spoon towards Sweetie Belle. Might be an unconscious one though...
This or either this fandom has me completely corrupted.

I'm excited to see a sequel to Moving On!

"Headache with pictures"--okay, THAT was ingenious.

Quite nice, here! Hmm, investigations? No, this can't possibly go wrong!

Now excuse me while I go find a Liarjack macro... :applejackconfused:


It's not like they're five year olds. I'd put them at about pre-teens to be honest, if the mane six are about 18 to 20-ish. Which is generally about the time these things start developing.

I'm also thinking there might be some Scootabloom there, otherwise I'm missing the point of Applebloom's sort of pained and wistful reluctance towards the thought of Cheerimac.

1208001 It's not like I've stated that they are five year olds.


I didn't say you did. I was backing your thoughts on the matter, so chill out.

1207008 Yes but typically not without planning to. But who knows I could be wrong and Big Mac and Cheerilee are just getting married, nothing more. :twilightoops:

Woah! I miss two days and a whole conversation! :duck:

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