• Member Since 31st May, 2012
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MaxBeezy


Better than Nicholas Sparks. Probably. Probably not. Also has a thing for Queen Chrysalis. Can't Explain Why.

Comments ( 612 )

This has potential. Looking forward to more.

This is sweet. Like a beggining to a gentle love story. I love it.

This a cute start, gonna keep my eye on this~ can't wait to see how their relationship progresses.

Like it so far. It's cute.

You don't see many Harshwhinny stories like this. Tracking and faved!

Wow featured on it's first chapter that's impressive.

10/10 best romance

Harshwinny is one of best waifu's.
Love to see more... like a lot more, as in "professional" office sexy times, and slight Femdom, and more 'harumphs.' (I especially love those.) :rainbowlaugh:

Damn! This is some good sh*t right here! You've gained a stalker tracker!

wew bby

not bad for anthro

and its not displaced trash

so thats a plus

I don't really like anthro or harshwinny but...
Not bad, not bad at all.

Another great story. And another lovely mare who deserves more loving.

Ready for more!:moustache:

“You can’t or you won’t?" I'm not going to respond to that. "Okay, fine. If you don’t tell me, I’ll fire you right here and now.”

You miserable old bitch...

Still, liking it so far.

Woof. Heavy stuff but really interesting, the main character was a lot more likeable as soon as the date started.

Great story, i love harshwhinny's personality here, not just black and white but a bit more complex. Hoping to see more!

Looks interesting, gonna be tracking this and see where it goes.

This has my attention…

Please, proceed.

MmmmmmMMMmm... Harshwhinny.:heart:

You may continue, with my attention.

Love it so far! I'm looking forward to see where this story goes! :pinkiehappy:

I like this. I like this alot. :pinkiehappy:

She doesn't get nearly enough love. I need more.

Loving it so far!:heart:

Highly unprofessional relationship

The boner is calling me.

Harshwinny's about to give him a harsh ride~ :yay:

This is looking good, I like it.

A great start, good work on this :yay:

No sex on the first chapter!!? :pinkiegasp: Now I'm really interested

I like where this is going. I'm really digging the tension between them. ^_^

Great start. Eagerly awaiting more :twilightsmile:

Well I'm sold.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Nice one so far! Can't wait for more!! :)

Wow, that was very nice.

I look forward to future chapters.

When the door closed behind them, Ms. Harshwhinny turned, smiled, and in a flash of green flame revealed herself to be a changeling.

8044634 YOU KNOW TO MUCH*Shoots Poison dart*

8044634
"Oh... well, if you thought you'd get some love outta me, guess what?!
Transforms into another changeling.
"You've been TROLLED!"
The cab driver steps out of the car.
"Oh, yeah? Well-"
The cab driver transforms into a changeling.
"BOOM! I FOOLED ALL YOU MOTHER-BUCKERS!"

... Sorry, I've been reading too many comics lately. :rainbowlaugh:
Inspired by:
img14.deviantart.net/8527/i/2013/142/4/d/movie_night_by_doublewbrothers-d6656bl.jpg
(If it doesn't show up properly, just go to THIS link.)
(And on THAT note... time for bed. :ajsleepy: )

Oh this is a delight already. I'm following this story like a guy wearing a trenchcoat in a back alley. Following. Watching. Waiting. :pinkiecrazy:

8038236
Looks like I wasn't the only one to think that. :flufflegasp:

Actually, she is one of the hottest milfs on mlp (yes, she has not son or daughter, but.. you know what i mean)

8046025 I believe the proper term would be a cougar?

8044731 * Catches Poison Dart With Chopsticks * MUDDA ASSHOLE IM CHINESE WITH CHOP STICKIARU YOU NO MATCH FOR ME!
Teddy Jinx: Where Did those chopsticks come from?
FROM MAH ASHOORE NOW SUCC MY ASSHORRE

Loved it, definitely has my like, fave and attention. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Your human character is kinda eh, but Harshwhinney is quite interesting so far.

Now imagine her reaction when she finds out she is pregnant...

8047210 Cadance comes in with a chainsaw. " I SMELLED SHIPPING! AND CHANGLINGS!"

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